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In Need
Jul 21, 2007 12:16:31 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Jul 21, 2007 12:16:31 GMT -6
at night I hear God
saying his prayers
for mankind
he calls upon the flowers
and animals
to kneel;
to be kind
for man indeed
is terminally blind,
and in need
of prayer
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In Need
Jul 21, 2007 16:18:20 GMT -6
Post by bichsa on Jul 21, 2007 16:18:20 GMT -6
Truly man is in needand indeed blind!
Great piece Dave ,Great!
peace ,C
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In Need
Jul 22, 2007 12:00:04 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Jul 22, 2007 12:00:04 GMT -6
Thanks for the read Cheryl  David |
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In Need
Jul 23, 2007 5:14:48 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Jul 23, 2007 5:14:48 GMT -6
"...for man indeed
is terminally blind..."
~fragementationing of Davidic versifying.
honestly true, as is the other species, womankind. solid gem of a poem, David.
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In Need
Jul 23, 2007 5:15:05 GMT -6
Post by roadrunner3 on Jul 23, 2007 5:15:05 GMT -6
How true, David, how true.
RR3
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In Need
Jul 24, 2007 9:52:54 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Jul 24, 2007 9:52:54 GMT -6
Thank you both kindly!
David
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In Need
Jul 24, 2007 14:03:49 GMT -6
Post by Sam on Jul 24, 2007 14:03:49 GMT -6
This is beautiful work, David!
Sam
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In Need
Jul 25, 2007 1:20:53 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Jul 25, 2007 1:20:53 GMT -6
Thank you Sam... much appreciated David |
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