Three nights in Zakopane

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Three nights in Zakopane Sept 4, 2006 10:41:05 GMT -6

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Post by anna3 on Sept 4, 2006 10:41:05 GMT -6

Three nights in Zakopane.

I ran to you on meeting
And I became drunk on your closeness
We plunged to each other
And we fell amazed
Lasting in this joyful intoxication
We couldn't find places
In bed our amusement
Laughing

I trembled as a leaf
In the gust which you were
With cold and fright
Before the storm which fell on me
I clung to you
How I would want to conceal myself in you
And you trembled yet more strongly
Apologizing...

You uncovered me
Now I had to find you
In darkness, blindfolded
You led me , you helped
Because alone I was yet too shy
In order to look before me
I felt guilty now
Sacrilege.

Last Edit: Sept 4, 2006 10:42:16 GMT -6 by anna3

DavidMc Administrator Posts: 2,508	Three nights in Zakopane Sept 4, 2006 14:44:48 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by DavidMc on Sept 4, 2006 14:44:48 GMT -6 This is lovely Anna. Joyously romantic, filled with optimist love light ;D A great heart massage. David P.S. Where is Zakopane?
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anna3 Member Posts: 107	Three nights in Zakopane Sept 5, 2006 1:44:23 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by anna3 on Sept 5, 2006 1:44:23 GMT -6 Thank you David It's always so nice to see your comments on my write , well Zakopane is on the South of Poland it's a lovely mountains town well known in Poland and close to another fashionable city Krakow Best wishes Anna

anirbas Admin In memory of when I cared. Posts: 10,242	Three nights in Zakopane Sept 5, 2006 20:32:55 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by anirbas on Sept 5, 2006 20:32:55 GMT -6 Delightful romantic poeming, Anna. Got more? Nir.

dawness Member Posts: 1,659	Three nights in Zakopane Nov 20, 2006 1:04:43 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by dawness on Nov 20, 2006 1:04:43 GMT -6 heavenly earthy! wow!

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Three nights in Zakopane

Post by anna3 on Sept 4, 2006 10:41:05 GMT -6

Post by DavidMc on Sept 4, 2006 14:44:48 GMT -6

Post by anna3 on Sept 5, 2006 1:44:23 GMT -6

Post by anirbas on Sept 5, 2006 20:32:55 GMT -6

Post by dawness on Nov 20, 2006 1:04:43 GMT -6

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