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Post by Juan Castrocafe on Oct 2, 2006 10:29:32 GMT -6
under an open sky, how long have you felt faded? glistening in your own sweat from an overhead sun, how far have you gotten jaded?
when, was the last time, you just danced, maybe there is something within you that really needs to be reacquainted,
under a starlit sky, how long have you not been a lover? longing in your own hormones for satisfaction, how many emotions have you let get hijacked?
when, was the last time, you sang a song without regard to who was listening, because something deep inside you, had to...
when was the last time, you danced, maybe there is something deep within you that you need to get re-acqainted....
maybe for the first time, maybe the last time, no matter what anyone else says or thinks, there is no time, like this time!
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Post by dawness on Oct 3, 2006 2:11:16 GMT -6
so endearing.... like a walk for the nth time. feel so good!
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Post by DavidMc on Oct 3, 2006 3:51:56 GMT -6
A very thoughfull poem John ... love yourself first, before trying to love others.
David
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Post by vixen on Oct 3, 2006 12:39:06 GMT -6
Wow, beautiful, somehow it makes me sad, berief. Makes of me think of how we put things off,waiting for the right time til we realize we have no time left. Very disturbing thoughts. Vixen
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Post by anirbas on Jun 21, 2014 20:58:54 GMT -6
Wow. I went to bump this, and found I'd not commented on it. Fabulous work, Jams. Can't believe I missed it the first go round...I beg of thee, forgiveth me...LoL
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