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Post by DavidMc on Oct 3, 2006 7:14:21 GMT -6
 If you were a tree, I would be the sun and rain, Nurturing the sap within I would catch your leaves of wisdom, as they fell, from your many branches. Caressing the bark, Of your magnificent trunk, I would be a... (((((( tree hugger Extraordinaire.))))))) No logger near allowed, To cut you down to size! |
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Post by vixen on Oct 3, 2006 12:33:23 GMT -6
Loved this David.you always make me smile. Vixen
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Post by soulfir3 on Oct 9, 2006 4:34:10 GMT -6
Beautiful write, David. I hope you do not mind, but I borrowed a similar idea and incorporated it into my own piece. Love the image of this one too.
Respect, Soul
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Post by DavidMc on Oct 9, 2006 5:10:25 GMT -6
Do I mind? .... I am honoured Dear Lady  David P.S. Nice to see you rising up from the 'nether regions'  |
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Post by poe on Oct 19, 2006 17:55:50 GMT -6
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
POE
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Post by soulfir3 on Oct 20, 2006 21:38:10 GMT -6
If you were a tree,
I would be the leaves,
that gathered at your feet
and collect earthen treasures,
offering them upward,
in grandeur and glory
as my only gift,
as part of myself,
I would forsake..
giving you lifegrowth and hope
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Post by DavidMc on Oct 21, 2006 9:02:27 GMT -6
This is what I love about this forum. We can build upon each others creations without conceit David |
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Post by anna3 on Oct 21, 2006 11:32:24 GMT -6
If I'd be a tree I'd breath deep feeling the caress of the sun above me wishing the rain down on me to let me grow with love to this one who let me be like this, wonderful write is this david, so poetical picture so sweet thank you for touching me |
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