|
Post by vixen on Oct 4, 2006 20:06:41 GMT -6
She chased the illusion Touched ghosts of the past Opens closet doors Wonders why its didn’t last
Questions flit through her mind But no answers come Just whispers of old arguments Things left unsaid and undone
She takes out the contents Lays them on the bed Remembering the last time they lay there The loving words he said
There was no warning How in the world could she know? That he had found another Then, told her he had to go
She touches her faded wedding gown Hears the vows they had said Thinking about shining promises Now left cold and dead
Tears fall down her face She wonders, “Is that all there is?” Memories of a shattered love …And boxes marked hers and his
|
|
|
Post by dawness on Oct 5, 2006 3:05:51 GMT -6
ouchingly bittersweet... his and hers shall they meet again?
|
|
|
Post by DavidMc on Oct 5, 2006 5:37:11 GMT -6
Very poignant write Vixen David
|
|
|
Post by anirbas on Oct 8, 2006 1:04:41 GMT -6
touching...achingly beautiful poeming, Vixen...it just is...Nir
|
|
|
Post by vixen on Oct 8, 2006 9:50:53 GMT -6
thanks all, am working on a follow up.Vix
|
|
|
Post by anirbas on Oct 8, 2006 15:23:23 GMT -6
breeng eet on, seestor...ggglgggl...Nir
|
|