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Post by brandnewmessiah on Nov 16, 2006 9:26:08 GMT -6
Strip for me, my demon girl My entire world My haunting love Where would I be if not for her Alone for sure In this grave I dug
Strip for me and leave your skin Just let me in Your decayed heart Rottenly I yearn for thee Come marry me Before we depart
It’s your lips that sear the sickness in my kiss I can’t resist this beauty of dead bliss In bone we carve the calling of new blood A tombstone says here lies my love
Strip for me, my brand new bride Dead outside Now reborn again Continually I tried to hide Your body from eyes Who could never understand
Strip for me, yes do it again I’ve never been This turned on Erotically to my chagrin How you pretend to be living Is what keeps me drawn
It’s your eyes that seep deep into my soul So blank and cold it’s you I want to hold Through the night locked in eternal embrace Daylight now seems like such a waste
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Post by kathylynn on Nov 16, 2006 20:18:34 GMT -6
Excellent write. very dark and very well done
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Post by DavidMc on Nov 17, 2006 11:59:48 GMT -6
I love this one BNM ... beautifully written and the image as per usual is awesome and tells a tale all it's own.
David
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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 17, 2006 13:14:33 GMT -6
love it x S
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Post by vixen on Nov 17, 2006 13:46:29 GMT -6
Oh my, what a dark subject. Wonderfully discribed. Vixen
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Post by dawness on Nov 21, 2006 12:21:34 GMT -6
oooh, wild as coal! so descriptive
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Post by anirbas on Nov 23, 2006 0:18:16 GMT -6
Nascently strong metaphorical visuals with romantically intimate undertones... Excellent study in the usage of cypherical double entendre and all that rot...LOL... The poem is a smoking one...It just is, BNM...It would work equally well, gracing the nether regions of The Dungeon, too...Hint...Hint...Hint...
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