|
Post by DavidMc on Nov 20, 2006 16:12:59 GMT -6
Because Of You
I miss my lunch in the morning stare at the screen dumbfounded wait for your unique caress as it pops up on the screen
Because of you I have become alive a reason to carry my life's charade for the first time into a realm of love
I stagger through my copious inventions of how love and life should really be startled at the magnitude of my pretensions of the rout to set my autumn spirit free all these incredible things I sincerely do because of you
|
|
|
Post by tolteclogic on Nov 20, 2006 18:33:26 GMT -6
Bravo! Love is a rare and beautiful thing.
No ordinary moments.
|
|
|
Post by anirbas on Nov 21, 2006 1:03:49 GMT -6
Because of You... This poem... I'm speechless at the moment... Able to speak only in body language... Shivering and softly smiling... Staring vacantly into the screen... Because of You...This poem...
|
|
|
Post by DavidMc on Nov 24, 2006 12:45:51 GMT -6
Because of you ... I spill my life into your hands go public in a very 'private' way
Because of you ... I believe my life is worth the living just for today...
Because of you ... I want to make myself proud of me in every way ...
Because of you ...
|
|
|
Post by anirbas on Nov 26, 2006 2:29:09 GMT -6
Oh, David...This is just beautiful...I've been trying to type a follow-up poem forever, to it...And I'm just to enchanted and man bespelled to do so...Either that, or I'm very, very sleepy...ggglgggl...Splendiferous Sundaying to you, sweets...Off to the land of Nodz for me... Because of you, I can't think right now...How do you do that to me? Stop it...Not...Not...Not...te amo...zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
|
|