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Regrets
Nov 20, 2006 4:03:52 GMT -6
Post by anna3 on Nov 20, 2006 4:03:52 GMT -6
There is so many years I haven't seen your face From all I’ve done I regret only one That I let you go away That I wasn’t able To show you how I feel Through all these years I couldn’t speak Standing so close to you During these few whiles too When I had a chance for more I regret also that I stopped to believe That this love can be real But now, right here I call you again my dear Much more strong than before I call you by your name Because I’m your love And you are Always and again My man
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Regrets
Nov 21, 2006 1:09:31 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Nov 21, 2006 1:09:31 GMT -6
~*"But now, right here I call you again my dear Much more strong than before I call you by your name Because I’m your love And you are Always and again My man"*~ ~fragmentation of Annaic verse. ~*~ Totally felt those lines, Anna...Entire poem was a delightful read with a strong undertone of rythmn, throughout it...Got more? ? Nir.
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Regrets
Nov 21, 2006 1:18:12 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Nov 21, 2006 1:18:12 GMT -6
thoroughly enjoyed this piece, look forward to reading more of you. Soul
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Regrets
Nov 21, 2006 1:21:53 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Nov 21, 2006 1:21:53 GMT -6
...sound of a nirling tiptoeing up behind S'fir, tapping her shoulder and whispering... TAG! TAG! TAG! JUST TAGGED YOU BACK! and you can't catch me, cause I'll have already have leaped outta this box and into another by the time you turn around... but...you can pass it on...LOL...i must still be on meds...oh, that's right, i am...hehe...Nir.
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Regrets
Nov 21, 2006 4:19:34 GMT -6
Post by anna3 on Nov 21, 2006 4:19:34 GMT -6
hello ladies, how it's sweet to see you, thanks for comments
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