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Post by brandnewmessiah on Nov 21, 2006 8:43:57 GMT -6
Where were you today I wanted to hear you say I love you Sitting all alone What happens is unknown Again this time
And my heart’s about to cave In from all the sorrow I find Hopefully tomorrow you’re still mine
Crying inside Feels like I died Every time you say goodbye Walking away Won’t save me from the pain No matter how hard you try
I’m always giving up With just an ounce of luck You’d be mine Please come take my hand And I’ll make you understand Everything will be fine
And my heart’s about to break Apart from all the sorrow I see Falling from your eyes unto your cheek
Hiding inside The pain of a past life Keeps a lock on tomorrow It’s useless to fight I’m holding on tight And I’ll never let you go
Tell me I haven’t blown it And we’ll live in this moment … Who needs tomorrow
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Post by dawness on Nov 21, 2006 12:11:02 GMT -6
gut wrenching, i can feel the angst!
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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 21, 2006 15:28:38 GMT -6
Loved this the first time you ever showed it too me and I still love it now.
Raw, powerful and extremely moving. x Soul
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Post by anna3 on Nov 22, 2006 1:17:49 GMT -6
It's so touching write, how it's hard sometimes to wake up from old dream to start the new one and to create future again if this what stay is always so sweet for you but someday you have to do it, yes. Wonderful expression
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Post by anirbas on Dec 4, 2006 13:44:31 GMT -6
Powerful writing...It just is...Sabrina.
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Post by Sam on Dec 4, 2006 14:44:26 GMT -6
"Every time you walk away, you take a piece of me with you."
Something about your poem reminded me of this song!
Very moving and touching!!
Sam
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