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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 9, 2006 15:09:00 GMT -6
Adorn my figure with White flowers The color of purity and innocence
Adorn my head with Thorns The pain of humility
Mark my heart with Crimson red For blood be of this color
Saturate my soul with Envy For that be the Black Hand that holds me
As integrity stifles Those who mourn I will weep with thee
And blasphemy shall never Cross this tongue I mourn myself, not
Adorn my face with Red hot tears For they shall never know of my existence
Adorn me with All of the colors of the same scope For it is this life that rapes me
Keeps me Binds me Soaked in nothing more than mere shame
And I, this flower Of opportunity That again and again, fails to open such doors
I am a bed of spores Seeping into every crevice I lie to you, not
These ribbons of sacrifice Linger, no more Awakening to the world’s many open sores
I taste the blood upon my bruised lips In ugliness, I am so adorned And still, I wonder what it means to be remembered
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Post by DavidMc on Sept 10, 2006 7:31:52 GMT -6
This reads like a prayer.. Extraordinary imagery you have used here. A very profound write.
David
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 11, 2006 18:33:45 GMT -6
Thank you for your feedback, hon, always ...
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Post by anirbas on Sept 12, 2006 9:11:09 GMT -6
Ah, Lauren...There you go again...Feels like you ripped a page, right out of my life...I love your writing...It's powerful, real and filled to the brim with truth...Nir.
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 12, 2006 16:43:36 GMT -6
Thank you ...
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Post by anirbas on Sept 14, 2006 9:40:03 GMT -6
Just enjoying reading your work so much, I feel blessed to do so. Nir
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 14, 2006 14:34:25 GMT -6
WOW!, heck, what a superb compliment, truly.
Thank you very much Nir ...
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Post by anirbas on Sept 14, 2006 21:22:08 GMT -6
You're very welcome...
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 15, 2006 0:39:16 GMT -6
*Smiles~ back
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