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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 9, 2006 15:15:54 GMT -6
Streamlining down the Interstate 100 to 120 miles per hour Slam it into overdrive Feel the rawness of pure power
As you slip and slide to miss your mark Feel the pounding rip open your heart Pull into a cul-de-sac Zip a reversal from your attack
Climb forty flights of stairs To your domain Stick a hot scorching needle Of warm juices into your veins
Slip back into reality In and out of sweet pain Misery the company you sell To do it all over again
You awaken to a scream The sound made by your own voice Lying dead in your lap is the lady of your dreams You ponder the need to make other choices
Speed is what you crave To end this nightmare, that is your right But you corner your self in a dead end Faced with yourself, you go back to your life
Messages belay your answering machine Will the incessant noise never end? But, this is just another day for… The ever elusive method man
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Post by anirbas on Sept 9, 2006 17:26:15 GMT -6
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh-eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Hell of reading ride!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! Take no prisoners and eat the hostages poeming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And a story I can relate to... Sheesh, Lauren...Sheesh, lady...Whew...Smoking writing...Slammed to the wall, pretty as you please!!!!!!!! Ain't no need to ask, got more? I know ya do , lady...Bring it! Bring it!!!! Please? ? *gigglegiggle*...Now, I'm going back for a re-rrrrrread.... Got me stuttering in typing...Sabrina.
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Post by anirbas on Sept 9, 2006 17:28:56 GMT -6
Screamingly realistic poeming...Pure power and adrenalin...Words danced...Danced like the nitty gritty truth...Ah, sheesh...There I go, effusing again...When all I meant to say, was the re-read was as good as the first read...
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Post by Juan Castrocafe on Sept 11, 2006 16:12:10 GMT -6
I have seen that guy in the mirror--gauntly staring back......long ago..but yeah...he is vaguely familiar! johm
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 11, 2006 18:33:12 GMT -6
Thank you, guys ...
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Post by anirbas on Sept 12, 2006 9:09:17 GMT -6
You're very welcome, Lauren...It's a great work... I didn't see that guy in the mirror, John...But, I've lived with him, many chapters back in the book of my life...And have witnessed so many lives ruined by hard drug addictions...The addict and the ones who love them... Blessed be, folks. Nir.
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 12, 2006 16:44:14 GMT -6
Thank you, hon.
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Post by anirbas on Sept 13, 2006 21:26:22 GMT -6
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