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Post by anirbas on Sept 10, 2006 10:21:50 GMT -6
Power blown, confusedly flashing mixed signals at an intersection... No one paid attention... No one yielded to the unexpected...
Collusion of boundaries and spaces, as vehicles greet and meet in a horrific collision; creating a dissonant othernworld symphony...
Sensitive fingertips sliding down violin strings from first to seventh position... A caterwauling rip of aurical sensation, starts the nightmarish music, the spine tingling sound of brakes applied to late, rends the atmosphere...
Brass crash of cymbols follows, as fiberglass bodies, implode and explode upon impact; sending surreal sparkles of fairydust, to glimmershoot the air... Shatters of glass kiss concrete, the upper, brittle registers, of an angst riddled and skittering flute.. Twists of metal landing in shining, deadly curls upon the pavement, with the flat staccato bang, bang, banging of a snare drum...
A tennis shoe flies across the matte blue morning skies...A metaphorical heart, torn and thrown from an unsuspecting foot...
Power blown, confusedly flashing mixed signals at an intersection... No one paid attention... No one yielded to the unexpected...
Collusion of boundaries and spaces, as vehicles greet and meet in a horrific collision; creating a dissonant othernworld symphony...
~Sabrina.
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Post by Juan Castrocafe on Sept 11, 2006 16:15:33 GMT -6
like you turned on a violently sweet tv for my mind...no blue tubes though!!! all high D!
johnm
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Post by anirbas on Sept 12, 2006 9:01:27 GMT -6
LOL...thanks, John...sort of coupled a car wreck I saw years back, with the reality swirling about me, in Nirland...Violently sweet tv...haha...That was funny...Made me laugh...And that's a good thing...To laugh...Nir.
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Post by dawness on Sept 24, 2006 5:13:55 GMT -6
whew...a mix of light and shadow. alright, sabs! delectable poetrying! hugggs, lady of purple forest
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 24, 2006 15:51:31 GMT -6
Hey sweetie, fab work on this, truly a radical piece that shows just how turbulent the world could be.
While I am here, enjoying this masterpiece, there appears to be a typo with the word otherworld, where in a couple of times was spelled as undernworld.
Lol, you are so silly; silly
This is truly brilliant! Oorah!
Lauren
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Post by anirbas on Sept 24, 2006 21:34:25 GMT -6
Thanks a million, Dawn and Lauren! I value your opinion, both as writers, and my mentors and peers...And because you're women, I know your comments, aren't a load of bs...LOL...And you're so right, LP...There was a typo...But, it was in the title...Othernworld, is the old way of saying, otherworld...Undernworld...Now who's being funny? *ggglgggl* You had me racing up and down the piece looking for the word undernworld...but, that little racing exercise pointed out I'd left an n out, in the title, itself... And you must know me, as yes, I am soooooo sillllllly...*t-he*...At least, every other day of the week...Sabrina.
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