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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 14, 2006 7:05:19 GMT -6
Belittled Ridiculed The complete opposite of … Free
Chastised Brutally beaten down This is not what I wish to do for … Control
Desecrated Hopeless A downfall I would have never … Expected
Remorse Virility Vitality, the only salvation to … Destiny
Fallen Forgotten The angel of times, so close to having … Heart
Negativity Failure To this, I just can no longer … Succumb
Reality Despair Painfully recognized for the devastation of the … Many
Alone Distressing This helps me to realize that time is of the … Essence
And for that I can … Overcome the distance left behind
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 14, 2006 7:13:32 GMT -6
good GOD almighty...woman...
you just keep getting more and more amazing... and it seems...deeper and deeper into your authentic 'zone'.
you have such clarity in your 'verse-voice'.
PLEASE keep poeming...you've got a rare and wonderful gift. IMPRESSIVE...!
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Post by DavidMc on Sept 14, 2006 7:20:52 GMT -6
I'm running out of superlatives for your poems Lauren ;D
Just have to echo Nimbus.
David
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Post by anirbas on Sept 14, 2006 9:25:56 GMT -6
Big cheshire cat near grin...I told you, NImbus...This ain't Kansas...LOL... And the feast table is LOADED!!!!!!! I'm so orbitally drunk in here, I leave grit eyed from just reading...Half the time can't poem, cause I can't stop reading and commenting. I love it! Meet Lauren, a wonderous word dancer and ripper extraordinaire!
Terrific Thursdaying, folks. Nir...psst...LP...Got more?
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 14, 2006 14:42:27 GMT -6
WOW! Double WOW!
I am truly speechless, for once in my life, lol.
Thank you guys, very much!
Lauren
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Post by anirbas on Sept 14, 2006 21:25:12 GMT -6
*giggles and grins* no sins in being speechless from hearin' the truth, Laurens... *t-he* Nir.
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 15, 2006 0:38:35 GMT -6
Thank you for saying that, hon.
*Hugs~ & *Smiles~
Lauren
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