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Post by dawness on Sept 17, 2006 13:56:50 GMT -6
awwwh, nims...so poignant! love them.... see you att creative 4 dgroup, sign now!  hugggs, pal ---- even if i smile outside the silhoutte of your porch's shadow this sense of bliss is a facade trimmed with poison ivy. i recoil thinking that you are beside me with your body, your heart is continents away. |
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Post by shell on Sept 17, 2006 17:38:25 GMT -6
Each of these versions of those moments is deeply touching and so open ... i kind of think that every emotion has to be experienced and somehow, even though it hurts, each moment in solitude or grief has the opportunity to become aware ... you know, a "more-than" ...
I'm not sure if that makes any sense (grammatically). I have travelled the same path and in a strange way would not change any of it or release myself from the experiences because the realisations were awesome ...
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Post by DavidMc on Sept 18, 2006 9:42:04 GMT -6
These are beautiful, tender and moving pieces Nims. Crafted with great elegance.
David
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Post by anirbas on Sept 18, 2006 17:13:48 GMT -6
deep, poignant, and touching...who could ask for more of poetry? great work, Nims. i know you've got more...just bring it...bring it on...Nir.  |
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 6, 2006 2:26:58 GMT -6
Good of each of you
in the way you grasped
the meaning of these poems...
VERY good...
Bless You...
'NIM's
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hugggs, pal
