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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 14, 2006 14:46:39 GMT -6
Dispose of the pain
Point it inward, for now
So that you may matter
On the outside
Someway, someday,
Somehow!
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Post by Sam on Sept 14, 2006 14:54:56 GMT -6
Very good and very true!!
Sam
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 14, 2006 20:14:54 GMT -6
very meaningful, Lauren
short...elegant...eloquent
'NIM's
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Post by anirbas on Sept 14, 2006 21:06:04 GMT -6
Dispose of the pain Point it inward, for now So that you may matter On the outside Someway, someday, Somehow! ~Liquidpromise. ~*~ Dark gem of a poem, Lauren. Loved it! Nir.  |
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 15, 2006 0:42:39 GMT -6
I wouldn't know what to do if I didn't have you guys to share my works with.
It makes me happy to know that my works can inspire, becuase of people like you, I thrive to aspire and be inspired.
THANK YOU! ...
Lauren
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 15, 2006 1:07:56 GMT -6
You're quite welcome...Luv.
I hope I speak for our other 'family-poem-eers' as well.
also, Lauren...to be inspired by others is to be inspiring to others.
and you do it gracefully !
Poem onward...outward...upward
Jeffrey
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Post by DavidMc on Sept 15, 2006 15:31:04 GMT -6
;D
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Post by Juan Castrocafe on Sept 15, 2006 20:48:46 GMT -6
the unfolding flower yields not to its nature
for it has yet to find its own nurture?
jm
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 16, 2006 8:12:58 GMT -6
Not sure how I would answer that question, Jim, but if it should mean how far will I travel to get beyond mere basic survival, then yes.
Thank you, everyone, I truly mean that.
Lauren
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