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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 16, 2006 8:27:12 GMT -6
A small child plays Without a single care in the world Then wakes up one day and realizes Her voice had never before, been heard
Silenced by circumstance Even she sobs quietly Not out of reluctance, just buried Under the weight of a crushing reality
Once bitten below the moon of loneliness A sweet talker, she would have had the gift for gab Tears spill on paper like tiny blood drops For the life she never knew, nor ever had
Now playing a dangerous game of Russian roulette With a life hanging in the balance She aims to please so as you may forget The innocence she traded in creating a disturbing alliance
With the root of all evils She tries to scream without making a dent Scarred severely, causing agonizing bleeds Doomed for all eternity, time well spent
Too late to turn around Too much pain seeps through A lost cause on the surface What she would not sacrifice to save you
Peacefully, she now transcends death You never knew your mother, the kind of person she was She traded misery so you would have the life she did not And she did so willingly; out of love
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Post by anirbas on Sept 16, 2006 16:08:02 GMT -6
Powerful poeming, Lauren. Absolutely beautiful. Nir.
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 16, 2006 16:49:48 GMT -6
Thank you, hon
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Post by anirbas on Sept 18, 2006 17:14:40 GMT -6
You're so very welcome, sweets.
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 23, 2006 4:55:13 GMT -6
*Smiles~
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Post by anirbas on Sept 24, 2006 1:17:19 GMT -6
Slipping by for a re-read...Your works strike chords in me...That leave me reeling... As do many of you writing in here...That's the beauty of poetry, yes? It packs a punch, in so short a space of time and spaces, literally...I swear, I could read til my eyes fell out on the keyboard...LOL...Hope that doesn't happen though...
Find me Know me Remember... ME
I like that, too...Nir
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 28, 2006 5:48:45 GMT -6
Lol ...
Thanks sweetie, Lauren
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