TORN ELEMENTS

[liquidpromise]

Life is harming me
Can you not see?
Fire spews from these lips
Each time they part

I have angered you
Will you not speak?
Of these things
Time will not permit me to say?

Here I sit with more agony
Then any one person will recognize
Tears of pure red blood
Spurts from my eyes

Will you not feel for me?

My very livelihood is in chaotic contortion
One might say almost from will
I am spinning nearly out of control
In a net of my own making?

I do not believe you

The palpitations of my heart
Are screaming
Will you not touch me?
If only to see if I am real?

My soul panics not so quietly
The silence is upon its wings
I need wings now to fly away from you
Will you not comfort me?

And I shall fly away
To a place where I am not so alone
Not so unfortunate to be on my own
Will you not hold me?

…Until the whispers are gone?

[DavidMc]

In this moment I will hold you. As would anyone who asked to be held. We don't hold each another enough, but let our fellows suffer on alone

David

[liquidpromise]

Yeah, the world does appear to be getting worse over the ages.
With all of this new technology, and people tryng to get ahead, courtesy and other compassionante ideals become weak and non existant.

It's all in the power of the word "I", or rather the fault of it.

I don't do convos on behalf of politics and/or religion; that is about how much [you] (generally speaking) are going to get out of me, lol.

*Smiles~

Thank you, hon, for inviting me to your wonderful site, and for the feedback.

Lauren

[anirbas]

Powerful poeming, Lauren. Got more?

[liquidpromise]

You know I do, lol

[Bronwyn]

Hello Lauren, powerful poem, and so true.
Yesterday, at my work, I just went up to two
girls and gave them hugs for no reason but just
to be real. One of them almost started to cry,
and said, "Thank you, thank you."
I like what you're saying in this poem.

[liquidpromise]

Thank you hon, I am very glad if it helps.

*Smiles~

Lauren