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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 19, 2006 5:51:40 GMT -6
I look past myself
I do not quite like what I see
I try to look through myself
But solid mass blocks my visibility
I reach out to myself
Only to touch the glass
And the reflection of me
I just cannot seem to get past
I reach inside of me
And all I find is you
Forever a part of me
Your memory I cannot lose
And when I am at my very worst
I am ready to just walk away
I will never end up like you
I used to hear myself say
So I peer deeper into the glass
Full of might and intentions
I guess I will just have to find another way
Of seeing beyond my own reflection
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Post by dawness on Sept 20, 2006 13:28:50 GMT -6
reflective and beautiful...  thanks for this gift. |
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 23, 2006 4:56:14 GMT -6
Thank you, hon
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Post by anirbas on Sept 24, 2006 21:40:37 GMT -6
evocative offering... not sure what the inspiration originally was for this piece... but, it made me think of my mother... love the true grit of reality i find based in so many of your pieces, LP; no matter your inspirationing... got more? Nir.  |
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Post by DavidMc on Sept 25, 2006 5:53:52 GMT -6
Another fine and reflective offering David |
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 25, 2006 15:29:52 GMT -6
Most of my works aren't really directed at any one person or even situation, they are more based on the emotions I could not otherwise deal with, had I not had the outlet of flowing words on the pages I write.
On the surface of each piece, I must come across as a very sad person, and that is true for the most part, so these reflections (pardon the pun), has a much deeper meaning that goes beyond words. I don't consider these words I am writing but rather these emotions coming alive in a way would otherwise cause me to deteriorate.
This process is healing, and since I can only write what I know, well, sweetie there you have it ... *smiles~
Thank you, Nir and David, sincerely and from the bottom of my heart.
Lauren
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Post by anirbas on Sept 26, 2006 21:02:52 GMT -6
in my estimation, the best writers, always write what they know...and you do not come across to me as sad...but, a wise lady with a major sense of humor...of course, some of my past writings, have had me branded as dark...none of which have been brought here, to date... so, perhaps, i wouldn't know sad if i saw it...LOL...i'm working very hard to contain my darkness at this site...ggglgggl...leaving it in the dungeons used up in fantasy...lol... darkness, sadness it's all a part of life and ain't life grand? except for when it isn't... or some such nirphilosophy...*t-he*... and you're welcome, Lauren, sincerly from the bottom of my heart... but, i'm told it's cold as ice and ten times as charred...lol... nir. |
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Post by liquidpromise on Sept 28, 2006 5:53:27 GMT -6
Lol, thank you .......................... so much for that and the laughter, *smiles~
Please do give your writes a chance here, as I would love to hear what you have to say, and besides, this is the DARK board, so go for it sweetie and I will read.
Lauren
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thanks for this gift.
