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Post by anirbas on Sept 19, 2006 19:29:51 GMT -6
they shuffle the concrete jungle. shadows of themselves; this world. the cloak of invisibility, gifted by society wrapped tight about stooped shoulders. proudly worn, their anonymity. it is magic! in it, they cannot be seen. going about a day's routine. poking through trash like a stray cat. hoping to find fresh, half-eaten scraps. collecting the city's cast-offs in battered carts, barely rolling. sitting in doorways, dark alleys in ones, twos, and threes. gulping liquid utopia from green, glass bottles of warm, cheap wine. bought with a few quarters, nickels and a single, bent dime. tossed towards them as we turned our heads. afraid to see a long-lost friend, kith or kin. and so they remain, by society, abandoned.
-sabrina
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Post by shell on Sept 20, 2006 8:40:30 GMT -6
It is an indictment of all that there are any on this planet without food, water and shelter .... grrrrr ....
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Post by DavidMc on Sept 21, 2006 5:56:08 GMT -6
Another poem written with great empathy.. You never fail to disappoint. I could read your stuff 'til the cows come home.. David
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Post by dawness on Sept 21, 2006 6:24:14 GMT -6
dark as chocolate, sabs! well done. i'll pass tonight from the wrechedness of evening's death, this silence is shattering my gut. yet i'm filled.
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Post by anirbas on Sept 21, 2006 22:18:39 GMT -6
Thanks a million, gang! And thanks for leaving an offering, DG! Another Dawnic gem, I might add and did...LOL...Nir.
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Post by darkness0within on Dec 4, 2018 7:56:48 GMT -6
So many reasons for someone to fall. Most times it is beyond the persons control. And this is not a new problem.
Can something be done? Of course, but is there the will to do something about it?
The sad fact is that there will always be people who slip through the cracks in society. Is it right? No.
Thought provoking write anirbas.
It deserves another airing my friend.
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Post by anirbas on Dec 21, 2018 20:11:38 GMT -6
Why thank you kindly, for the airing and the comments, Darkness.
What I notice, is it needs a good editing...Haha...Are poems ever really finished???
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Post by darkness0within on Jan 3, 2019 7:55:06 GMT -6
"What I notice, is it needs a good editing...Haha...Are poems ever really finished???"
Personally for me I think most times no. But there are a few (Not mine by the way)that are perfection.
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