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Post by soulfir3 on Sept 30, 2006 14:52:01 GMT -6
I stood at the edge of your abyss consumed with the thought of your embrace Blind to the jagged claws which ripped my soul shredding the delicate veins of my life hold I waded, knee deep into your appearance not willing to see the blackened shadows That lingered, whispered fed upon my heart
I stood at the edge of your abyss and stared into the hollow maw, which was yours Numb with acceptance, too tired to flee aching with need of you, angered at my self reliance Feeling your hands mould, manipulate clay like I became, your heat my substance Releasing into the black anger, bubbling tremors seethe through my complete being
The abyss, which is you swallows me whole I stood at the edge of your abyss pools of time, reflect back at me I am held still, forgetting who I am why it is, that I have arrived at this point You feed from me, your own greed leaving me thirsty, malnourished Of life itself your fingers delve between my muscle and vein,
Infusing yourself to me the black trail of your deception seeps inside The hollow echo I hear, lingers louder, clearer
I stood at the edge of your abyss and felt myself once more fall Fool am I for believing that the words you spoke were true The last strangled breath of my soul escapes, barely
My heart torn and shredded with your hurtful abuse you eyes choose not to see And my soul screams in a silent plea I stood at the edge of your abyss lost, once more in the pits of your Black, fiery hell
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Post by anirbas on Oct 1, 2006 10:51:38 GMT -6
*WALLBANGER* Smoking poeming, S'fir...Just smoking... Nir.
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Post by soulfir3 on Oct 2, 2006 16:48:33 GMT -6
Thanks! Soul
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Post by Sam on Oct 4, 2006 9:33:50 GMT -6
Soul!!
what can I say? I felt this!!! I literally felt it!!
Powerful!!
Sam
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Post by dawness on Oct 6, 2006 9:50:38 GMT -6
unforgettable???
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Post by soulfir3 on Oct 9, 2006 5:22:49 GMT -6
thanks everyone! x Soul
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Post by lilly on Oct 21, 2006 7:03:00 GMT -6
i have been there many a times we need to seek out better relationships this is not love but yet we are drawn strangley to it and why i stand on the abyss with you dear soul searching for perfection and love to fill your very soul you deserve the best it hurt to see u have suffered just as i have but u have the talent to say so where i just take it onboard most times n carry on thank you i fin solace in your work i love it i hate it only because it contains you hurt wish i could take it away love u lilly xxxxxxx
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