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TWITCH
Oct 25, 2006 6:37:05 GMT -6
Post by brandnewmessiah on Oct 25, 2006 6:37:05 GMT -6
 Combative, aggressive
Don’t you know where your mind is
No more incentive
The war inside has become too big
Escape the creating
Of what’s destroyed by past mistakes
Eyes dilating
Into a sleep that never wakes
Where is the peace to come from the pain
Is my release from being insane
Where will I be when I lose it all
My memories are starting to crawl
TWITCH
I am hating
TWITCH
Salivating
TWITCH
Done debating
When is it the right time to die
TWITCH
Complicating
TWITCH
Impersonating
TWITCH
Evaluating
The hatred that lies behind my eyes
Catastrophic, abrasive
Keep the advice you want to give
You keep erasing
Every life I’ve tried to live
Dirt I am tasting
Inside the lies you feed to me
Your words you are wasting
On someone whose lost all belief
Where is the love to come from the heart
Stuck in the dagger and tore it apart
Where will you be when I lose it all
Right next to me but you let me fall
TWITCH
I am dying
TWITCH
Keep relying
TWITCH
Been defying
The reality of being myself
TWITCH
I am hiding
TWITCH
In what you are implying
TWITCH
Is dividing
My happiness from my own hell |
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TWITCH
Oct 25, 2006 7:23:58 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Oct 25, 2006 7:23:58 GMT -6
Twitchingly excellent offering of mental and emotional nascence, Bnm. Got more? Nir.
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TWITCH
Oct 25, 2006 12:35:13 GMT -6
Post by shell on Oct 25, 2006 12:35:13 GMT -6
Awesomely overwhelming in fury and despair. I am really loving how your poetry style has changed, evolved ... kind of rebirthed itself with even more fire.
"You keep erasing
Every life I’ve tried to live"
eerrgghh! i so know this .. "they" manifest differently but .. not; always the same demon in new guise. And where are they when we fall .. ohhh yes, right beside, savouring every darn moment .. salivating ... wondering if they could have done more .. to make it worse for you, better for them ... hallelujah, eh?
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TWITCH
Oct 25, 2006 14:52:43 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Oct 25, 2006 14:52:43 GMT -6
Awesomely brilliant!!, as always
Thrilled to be reading your work once more. Welcome to the site, its great to have you here
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TWITCH
Oct 28, 2006 0:37:23 GMT -6
Post by liquidpromise on Oct 28, 2006 0:37:23 GMT -6
Do you have to be perfect in every write you successfully write and share? *Smiles~
I envy your genius, sometimes.
LaurenC
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TWITCH
Oct 29, 2006 10:55:43 GMT -6
Post by dawness on Oct 29, 2006 10:55:43 GMT -6
such strong presence ; it hynotizes anyone who reads this. thanks!  |
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