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Post by anirbas on Oct 25, 2006 7:56:06 GMT -6
Rain moves in wavering drizzles across the sleeping metroplex... Eyes of the cloud clotted skies drip, drip, drip with silent cries...
In the near distance a dog growing wetter by the minute howls...
No one listens... No one hears him... Except me...Dueting him with my own brand of howling misery...
Emotionally and mentally licking my wounds under the cover of darkness where none can see... And be frightened or harmed by my shameless display of pain...
And yet, the rain just keeps pouring... The dog keeps howling without abeyance... As I stand on the backporch growing wetter by the minute, my tears invisible this way, mixed amongst the raindrops wetting my face...
Finally, I can't stand it anymore... I run down the porch and to the back fence, and howl loudly into the wind and the water, from there... The dog shuts up...Knowing its not alone...Anymore...
But, I still am...I still am...Still am...Am...Alone...
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Oct 25, 2006 8:43:55 GMT -6
Very expressive in your imagery with this one Anirbas. You can feel the rain and hear the howls of the dogs. Great way of putting you right into this piece. ~ BNM
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Post by anirbas on Oct 29, 2006 0:37:27 GMT -6
Thank you, BNM. Nir.
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