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Post by anirbas on Oct 29, 2006 0:13:01 GMT -6
A thumb severed from a hand... Lies and rumors of lies that risk and threaten lives... Lines drawn in the sand...
A wedding ring slipped from a finger in a moment of anger and tossed down a flushing toilet... Money spent and wasted on a fake charm...
A contact lens escaped from your eye adrift on an ocean of beach sand... A dropped coin that rolls into the darkness of a street drain...
A violin string, wound to tightly, snapping with a zing... Virginity, innocence and youth... Words that maim and bring harm...
Choices that make one a societal predator, a sex offender or a heinous murderer... A broken stilletto heel on your favorite pair of cheap shoes...
Various and varying circumstances, nonrefundable life instances with one common denominator... All are things you can't recover...
Sabrina.
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Post by DavidMc on Oct 29, 2006 4:12:36 GMT -6
Excellent poeming.. for some reason, the thought of losing a contact lens (even though I don't wear them made me shudder) on a beach.. weird how the mind sometimes works David
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Post by Juan Castrocafe on Nov 3, 2006 10:06:14 GMT -6
i drowned a fly once in some water then I poured salt on him and he lived I bet he put some of his maggots in some dog poo...
but yeah, my sanity...haaaww haawww he heeee it was in that poo! I shall not recover!
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Post by anirbas on Nov 4, 2006 2:32:44 GMT -6
;D Thanks, David! I could never entertain the thought of wearing contacts myself...And it was meant to be a sort of abstract shudder visual...Good to know it worked that way with at least one reader...LOL...As when writing the piece, I visualized this sliver of glassine eye skin, utterly invisible in the sand, whilst it's "owner", on knees searched for it in that ocean of sand...And a barefooted runner stepped upon it, embedding it in his heel...Yes, strange and delightfully miraculous how the mind works...ggglgggl... Thanks for sharing a non-recoverable offering, LW! Another angle of mind strangeness...[dodges flying pink flamingoes...LOL] Ya'll both take care and be having a grrreat weekened! Sabrina
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