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Post by soulfir3 on Oct 29, 2006 23:54:44 GMT -6
I
walked a fine line
tonight
threadbare edges
felt invisible
underneath
I
walked a fine line
tonight, and
cursed the fact
I
have the ability
too still breathe |
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Post by Sam on Oct 30, 2006 8:31:54 GMT -6
I understand!
Sam
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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 2, 2006 1:55:37 GMT -6
Drawing lines in the sand,
I watch them
slowly erased by the drifting tides
A footprint, an etching of myself
dissolves into the foam
As it splashes against the now brittle land
the coldness envelopes me
Slowly walking onward,
continuing to draw lines in the sand |
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Post by dawness on Nov 2, 2006 23:05:24 GMT -6
feeling you from start to end, soul...
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Post by anirbas on Nov 4, 2006 2:35:59 GMT -6
evocative and beautifully emotive poeming, S'fir!
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