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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 13, 2006 0:55:18 GMT -6
Numbwith exhaustion, when I thought I could no longer be angry it boils once more and there is something else, another penetrating thought of what is and what should of been Agitatedwith this ache, which refuses surrender and burrows under the, deepest veins of my heart coursing through my blood and inside my mind Confusedfrom the constant conflict of all, the exile I have been given under you're own doing without reason or understanding with words that shattered, a heart already torn Numbfrom all that has been done, and the way life is now the anger bubbles underneath and I can no longer sleep words form on my lips but from I am too tired too concentrate, and thus words slip away From the inability, I have to speak
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Nov 13, 2006 10:27:05 GMT -6
no words have to be spoken to feel your emotion in this piece. Excellent soul! ~ BNM
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Post by dawness on Nov 14, 2006 8:28:19 GMT -6
you light what seems to be dark. shimmering gem, soul.
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Post by anirbas on Nov 19, 2006 1:09:48 GMT -6
*WHAM!*
*SLITTTTTH!*
*WALLBANGER!*
I am having a been there, done that and still doing that kind of feeling in the reading of this poem...Agree with the above, shimmeringly excellent work, S'fir...Just is...Nir.
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