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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 17, 2006 1:01:14 GMT -6
an icey touch
runs along my spine
relentless,
invasive,
penetrating,
without concious or desire
it fills me with repulsion
yet, I am frozen..
timeless capture of consent |
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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 17, 2006 4:32:40 GMT -6
words fall from your lips,
scorching like acid,
I fumble,
falling before you
and in your own self deceit,
you see it as submission
not the fleeing of soul,
or will..
I cry before you,
yet the sound is unheard
and the words that you speak
burn deep inside of me..
echoing like a relentless dream,
that one voice,
that refuses to quieten
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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 17, 2006 5:45:08 GMT -6
i am a shard of glass,
crumbled with age..
the light shines through me,
but the reflection is dimmed..
almost opaque,
residue of life grime,
smears the view..
i am a shard of glass,
fractured, discarded..
the light shines against me,
but can not penetrate..
shadows linger,
longer and more prominant..
i am a shard of glass,
which has disintegrated,
fallen wayside,
and become forgotten
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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 19, 2006 0:55:02 GMT -6
a dream lays discarded,
forgotten like an orphan child
laying just out of arm's reach
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Post by anirbas on Dec 3, 2006 21:02:50 GMT -6
lots of times, i'm so mindblown after reading your poems, S'fir...
all i can think is beautiful...just beautiful...dratted smoking
poeming comes to mind, too...Nir.
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Post by soulfir3 on Dec 4, 2006 22:32:48 GMT -6
I think I'm drowning in emotions here Nir.. just when I think I can't cry any more, I'm a bawling mess again. I wish I could say that I see the light at the end of the tunnel, but I don't.
Thank you for your support and enjoyment of my work. ~S
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Post by DavidMc on Dec 5, 2006 1:38:41 GMT -6
This is an amazing sequence of poems Soul, each one builds on the intensity of the one before. I'm sorry things are so bad for you at the moment  Take care. David |
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Post by Sam on Dec 6, 2006 15:28:25 GMT -6
Soul,
I wish I had the magic words to help you now. Unfortunately, there are none. Please stay
focused on the things in your life now that you are so much a living part of......wrap yourself
around them and hold on tight.....
Always, know how much you mean to your friends here, and I am sure the friends you have close to you!!
We are entering the toughest part of the year! I know.
Thinking of you!
Love,
Sam
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