Restless Night

[DavidMc]

Restless Night.

Flaming titanium sears my dreams,
Beneath dry ice I gasp;
Inbetween the sobbing of the years,
A millennium of fears gush,
In the passing of one restless night

Coital, fetal, primordial…
Shaking, sweating, sobbing…
Mismatched prions spark
Fight or flight?

Searching breathless for your soul,
Inside a mortuary of lies;
Nothing survives except for hope,
Even as atrocious human stains
Leech up through twisted generations,
In the passing of one restless night

[brandnewmessiah]

admin said:

Restless Night.
Coital, fetal, primordial…
Shaking, sweating, sobbing…
Mismatched prions spark
Fight or flight?

This line really stood out to me, while reading I could feel the twisting and shifting inside just as you describe. Brilliant work David! ~ BNM

[anirbas]

I have to agree with BNM, David...Brilliant work...I can't say it better than he did,
so, what he said...ggglgggl...Sabrina

[netfolk]

well david this is my first time in the dark stuff here at poetryseasons, I must say the writing is fantastic, this write is no exception.

peace as always,
Bernie

[DavidMc]

BNM and Sabrina, thank you for your comments


Nice to see you exploring the house Bernie ;D ... Beware the Dungeon though

David