I Hate You

[soulfir3]

these eyes,
which stare with vacant direction
back into my own,
have no remorse
cold displeasure trails over my skin
recoiling from touch,
images entwine themself into mind
laughing in twisted echoes
dark shadows,
draw closer
sinking lower into a hole of depression
unseen in the corners,
blanketing myself away from light
touch...
eyes blink,
shading themselves from you
a reflection, I don't want too see
a voice, I don't want too hear
created by the rejection constantly adorned
with fist curled,
a mirror is shattered
blood curdling red,
splashing against the floor
a brief release of this pain
these eyes,
stare with vacant expression
words fall without sound from my lips,
I HATE YOU

[DavidMc]

Hate is like an ingrowing toenail...

You will feel the pain.

[Sam]

Hate is just another four letter word!
Nothing I haven't dealt with before
or ever seem to hear the end of....
When will it end?
I offer my heart,
my hand...
Take this life I give you
and live it the best way
you possibly can...
Who can do more?


Sam

[anirbas]

I Hate You is an honest portrayal of an emotion, no one wants to own...
But, that we've all felt, at least once, in our lifetime, for someone or something...HATE...
Coming to the point of hating someone, is often the gateway for growing away
from what is a toxic relationship at best, if the other person, has brought
you to hating them...Does that make sense? In other words, I don't think
hate is a bad thing, initially...It's a good thing if once you voice and own the emotion,
you move on and away from it...Otherwise, yes, it becomes a metaphorical ingrown toenail...

But, ain't nothing to hate about this poem, Soul...Excellent writing, as usual...Got more? Nir.