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Post by DavidMc on Dec 9, 2006 17:44:39 GMT -6
Pictures Of Women.
Pictures of Women,
On my T.V. screen.
Pictures of Women
In a magazine.
Splayed across staples
Part of a dream
Firm female flesh
For our delectation.
Pictures of Women,
What do you see?
A Man with a camera
A Man with a camera
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Post by pegesus on Dec 9, 2006 22:16:27 GMT -6
you know, if you were on this side of the ocean with nir instead of on the other side with the queen you might not have this problem
but other than that is was an exceptional piece as usual
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Post by soulfir3 on Dec 9, 2006 23:31:31 GMT -6
enjoyable write. thank you for sharing ~ s
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Post by dawness on Dec 10, 2006 9:51:26 GMT -6
sensory moding, david??? scintillating gem!
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Post by DavidMc on Dec 10, 2006 16:11:23 GMT -6
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Post by magpie on Dec 10, 2006 18:20:06 GMT -6
hee hee - yes the art reveals the artist... good one Dave!
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Post by DavidMc on Dec 10, 2006 18:24:08 GMT -6
I wrote this almost 20 years ago LOL! ... What does that say about my development?  |
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Post by magpie on Dec 10, 2006 18:30:48 GMT -6
hmmm i'd say you had a fine mind back then too...
this piece is good stuff mate
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Post by anirbas on Dec 12, 2006 9:56:42 GMT -6
I'd say you were quite astute for a young man of twenty years ago, then...What happened? hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe...Just teasing... This one always cracks me up, with it's flipped coin ending... That it is not the image, the woman you see, but a man with a camera... Waves and grins at the gang! Everybody get well, take care and blessed be! Sabrina  |
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