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Post by soulfir3 on Jan 15, 2007 17:39:07 GMT -6
poisonous memories drift in the mind, a life that one wishes, too leave so far behind a lover's hand caressing the fears bringing nothing but bruises swollen flesh and tears so many years ago time churns over slowly something triggers the mind another memory leaves the body reeling loving touches from one, now true - can't break down the barriers futile attempts in getting through bitter words fall from tongue until lover of the present becomes merely another one - where hands speak louder than spoken word no bruises this time but from verbal barrage there is little coping but gritting teeth too stop from coming completely undone history repeats and slowly entwines driving self insane as once more images fill the mind
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Post by anirbas on Jan 15, 2007 18:09:28 GMT -6
Hey, stop that...Stop writing about the images in my mind...Felt like you'd written my memoirs reading this piece...Mental and emotional misery and pain, universal feelings...And nothing on the shelf we can buy to make it easily all go away...
But, you managed to turn misery and pain into a beautiful thing in the crafting of this poem, Soul. Gorgeous writing, as always, lady!
Sabrina.
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Post by dawness on Jan 16, 2007 13:01:03 GMT -6
i sailed for three nights unbroken by the chills of your frigid gazes, wolves howl at your icy, frozen stares i melt.
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Jan 23, 2007 8:20:50 GMT -6
The night can be both a treat and a terror depends on what dreams run in one's mind. As always you pen it beautifully. ~ BNM
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Post by dawness on Jan 29, 2007 11:11:13 GMT -6
likewise, brands...
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don't torture the grasses ever so emerald with all your cunning thoughts so far you have murdered the very dew that made you drip like acid blood
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Post by anirbas on Jan 30, 2007 14:36:21 GMT -6
sleepless dreamings... nocturnal hauntings... leave me with bags under my eyes, and a butt that drags, through the next day...
LOL
just slipping by to say boo-hello to you, Soul and to add...adored the above gem you penned, and left, Dawn.
now, ya'll got more?
Nir.
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Post by dawness on Feb 4, 2007 4:31:35 GMT -6
haunted is the prisoner tied to his arms running from his own madness, not outside the bruised jungle of nowhere land but inside a pit known only by his hand
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