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Post by soulfir3 on Feb 5, 2007 0:10:11 GMT -6
I have watched his eyes change with his own appearance morphing from warm blooded lover too the cold stance of a stranger who's hands I no longer recognise fingers embedded underneath my hide bruising the soft supple skin blisting so easily, from scorching heat within I feel him penetrate, tear me until I'm bleeding deaf too pleas, succeed only in sickening arousal as eyes turn from coal like black I see flickers of green haze my point of view lips graze my shoulder giving pleasure, only to be replaced with seering pain of teeth into neck forcing me to draw backward so harsh is his hatred I lie bleeding, strangled by the touch of his own hands too busy satisfying selfish needs was once only for night time feeding, now his greed grows stronger and lust drives the soul does not notice me dying slowly under his heat as I become a cold blue corpse
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Post by anirbas on Feb 5, 2007 1:05:34 GMT -6
I wish I could say, I can't identify with this dark, poignant offering... Found myself thinking been there, done that, in reading it... Slice of life, not many dare delve into, poetically...
(((((Soul)))))
Nir.
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Post by dawness on Feb 5, 2007 7:46:17 GMT -6
the heart has no illusion when hurt deeply. priceless gem, soul! too much angst here, i feel like there are many dead men walking.
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