Nerves...

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Nerves... Feb 8, 2007 23:57:51 GMT -6

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Post by anirbas on Feb 8, 2007 23:57:51 GMT -6

Nerves, frayed twists of yarn,
snarled and tangled by a merciless kitten.

Nerves, flayed, peeled and thrown to the floor,
as vinyl casings emptied of their copper and steel.

Nerves, flopping and floundering on the ground,
as breathless as glittering fish,
captured betwixt and between,
the gossamer folds of a saining net;
thrown upon a riverbank,
to glimmer and fade,
in abject suffocation...

Nerves...We've all got them...
Except for when we don't...

dawness Member Posts: 1,659	Nerves... Feb 10, 2007 9:32:15 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by dawness on Feb 10, 2007 9:32:15 GMT -6 reminds me of my thursday, yipes!!! i like the anticipation of tranqulity here, sabs. Nerves...We've all got them... Except for when we don't... exceptional as always. ;0)

anirbas Admin In memory of when I cared. Posts: 10,242	Nerves... Feb 18, 2007 22:53:09 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by anirbas on Feb 18, 2007 22:53:09 GMT -6 I am always anticipating tranquility, DG...LOL...Thanks, chum! Chum, as in friend, not chunks of fishy junk thrown out to attract sharks...t-he... That's me...haha...NOT! Sabrina.

DavidMc Administrator Posts: 2,508	Nerves... Feb 20, 2007 4:49:57 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by DavidMc on Feb 20, 2007 4:49:57 GMT -6 Very well written, with an intense rhythm behind it. Love, David
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anirbas Admin In memory of when I cared. Posts: 10,242	Nerves... Feb 21, 2007 14:50:58 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by anirbas on Feb 21, 2007 14:50:58 GMT -6 Thanks, David! Love, Sabrina

brandnewmessiah Member Words are the ash which spew from my tongue Posts: 358	Nerves... Feb 22, 2007 8:16:53 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by brandnewmessiah on Feb 22, 2007 8:16:53 GMT -6 no matter how comfortable we become with something it's the nerves we can never shake. Awesome piece Anir! ~ BNM
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anirbas Admin In memory of when I cared. Posts: 10,242	Nerves... Jun 27, 2007 0:57:39 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by anirbas on Jun 27, 2007 0:57:39 GMT -6 Thanks, Messiah! Nir.

wistfuldragon Member Posts: 1,068	Nerves... Jun 30, 2007 13:25:05 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by wistfuldragon on Jun 30, 2007 13:25:05 GMT -6 Its the nerves that shatter whenever I think of Love... Loved this sweets...tasty bit it tis...

anirbas Admin In memory of when I cared. Posts: 10,242	Nerves... Jul 1, 2007 3:08:51 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by anirbas on Jul 1, 2007 3:08:51 GMT -6 ggglgggl...tasty as a dish spiced with gunpowder...thanks, sweets

wistfuldragon Member Posts: 1,068	Nerves... Jul 4, 2007 13:28:05 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by wistfuldragon on Jul 4, 2007 13:28:05 GMT -6 With gunpowder and whip sharp muses...tis glorious dark...

blownawayby: Sabs&Co!!!! It is I, Daph, aka blownaway, still alive, kicking a little lower for all the wear, but alive and so happy I came across Poetry Seasons' email address today. Hope to drift in and out a little more often than every death of a pope!

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artolmaeus: it is Sunday, the first day of the week and I have been awake too long, good night, thank you for this thing you do that has been ongoing, for as long as it does, well, I am glad it is here... Sept 17, 2023 0:23:26 GMT -6

anirbas: OMG! Blownawayby!!! Daph, I am so glad you found us, again! I always wonder where everyone goes, or how they are, when they disappear. I have been MIA for a while, now, myself. Good to see you! Oct 16, 2023 22:37:35 GMT -6 *