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HOLE
Feb 18, 2007 17:24:22 GMT -6
Post by bloodnsorrows on Feb 18, 2007 17:24:22 GMT -6
I am held in captivity
Wallowing along
This long and lonely journey to me
A fistful of doubts
And all I have gone without
Just aching to be free
Not wanting sympathy
But a foregone conclusion that will settle everything
The pain is so blinding and deceiving
Questions burned into my forehead
A neon sign for all to see
I just need to be free
Eyes swollen shut
The heart aches
Oh how severely the heart aches
The rope tight
Neck bent in an awkward state
Tongue swollen, pushing against the cheek
So sorry things had to end this way
I needed to be free
Just needed to be free
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HOLE
Feb 18, 2007 22:45:51 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Feb 18, 2007 22:45:51 GMT -6
"So sorry things had to end this way
I needed to be free
Just needed to be free"
~Lauren.
~*~
Felt the entire offering, but the last three lines, blew me away...Sabrina.
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HOLE
Feb 20, 2007 8:02:16 GMT -6
Post by dawness on Feb 20, 2007 8:02:16 GMT -6
i can relate to this, blood... the angst, the sullen mood, the despair. beautiful gem!
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HOLE
Feb 20, 2007 9:01:47 GMT -6
Post by tolteclogic on Feb 20, 2007 9:01:47 GMT -6
yes quite gripping - despair
reminds me of my six
months treatment
for terminal illness
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HOLE
Feb 20, 2007 10:08:48 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Feb 20, 2007 10:08:48 GMT -6
explosively brilliant - felt every emotion.. been there, done that myself more times than i care to count. keep up the wonderful work. x Soul
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HOLE
Feb 21, 2007 1:43:09 GMT -6
Post by bloodnsorrows on Feb 21, 2007 1:43:09 GMT -6
Thank you very much, everyone, truly...
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HOLE
Feb 21, 2007 14:57:37 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Feb 21, 2007 14:57:37 GMT -6
You're welcome, madam! Truly... A treat to see you back, Lauren...Totally!!! Speaking of seeing...Is that you? To the left and above me?  ? Oh my stars, cuz! You're gorgeous! And if that's not you... But, some famous poet's likeness... Enjoy the laugh on me and my rampant vapidity...LOL... Take care of you for me, ya hear? Sabrina. |
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HOLE
Feb 21, 2007 16:59:10 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Feb 21, 2007 16:59:10 GMT -6
This is a brilliant poem Lauren... I don't come into the 'dark zone' too often because it gives me nightmares  Respect, David. |
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HOLE
Feb 22, 2007 2:39:09 GMT -6
Post by bloodnsorrows on Feb 22, 2007 2:39:09 GMT -6
Well then D, I don't want you to have nightmares, but I thank you from the bottom of my heart for making that speical trip and for taking the time to read me.
Sincerely, I send you my thanks and major gratitude...
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Oh sweetheart Anirbas/Sabrina, thank you. Yes, that is a likeness of me, one of my photos I played around with using a plugin I purchased for psp8.
Thank you very much for the flowers, the two of you and everyone.
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Going to Cali for the weekend and all of next week, should be back by next Friday, maybe, *smiles~.
Not sure if we are going to be back or stay out a little longer than that. That's what I get for marrying a truck driver, *smiles. But I miss Cali, that's my home; so very glad to get to go back, even if for a short while.
I usually get the urge to write on long trips, so maybe I'll have some new stuff for everyone, when I get back.
Love you guys... Will miss you...
Lauren
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HOLE
Feb 22, 2007 7:47:30 GMT -6
Post by dawness on Feb 22, 2007 7:47:30 GMT -6
come home to us soon, lauren... graces to you!  |
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HOLE
Feb 26, 2007 11:50:29 GMT -6
Post by dog on Feb 26, 2007 11:50:29 GMT -6
elegant howl of a poem. dog
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HOLE
Feb 26, 2007 12:58:15 GMT -6
Post by vixen on Feb 26, 2007 12:58:15 GMT -6
Scarey reality. Been there done that, felt the pain of it through a cherish former student of mine. Much peace. Awesome job! Vixen
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HOLE
Feb 27, 2007 9:45:01 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Feb 27, 2007 9:45:01 GMT -6
Missing you til your safe return, we shall be, then!
Glad you're getting to go to a state you so love.
I've been thinking of moving to Cali, myself, eventually...
Any suggestions for scenic views in cheap neighborhoods
with low rent and yet a highly lauded and praised school system?
LOL...I'm being silly...There is no such place...You get what you pay for in this world...LOL
One of my few and most beloved galpals of 18 years lives out there in the Cypress area.
More like, she bunks there a few times a year as she is a truck driver and she and her wife
are always on the road, too. All over the states like I bet you guys are, too.
And yes, excellent time to write!!!! Can't wait to see what popped up in your head
when you get back, Lauren! And don't forget, to take care of you for us! Sabrina.
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HOLE
Mar 4, 2007 0:59:24 GMT -6
Post by bloodnsorrows on Mar 4, 2007 0:59:24 GMT -6
Thank you everyone...
No musings this week. Ended up getting the flu, so slept for most of the trip, but will see if I can get my muse to talk to me some time this week, or at the very least, soon.
Thanks again...
Lauren
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? Oh my stars, cuz!
