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Post by brandnewmessiah on Feb 22, 2007 8:30:35 GMT -6
 Painting the sky with despair
I always knew I’d find you there
Counting your misfortune in the clouds
We walk amongst the lives
Skipping over all those who died
A road of reality diminished and unplowed
Where would I kneel if needed saving
Just off the ground strangled by my halo
The colors of blood are now persuading
To transform beautiful into a black rainbow
Following the sorrow styptic road
Raven’s reply to my echo
With shedding feathers as a fog upon my heart
Empty as a well
That once was filled by the tears that fell
Now flood across this soul and tear my mind apart
Where would I aim if I needed killing
Ending it quick is better than dying slow
If I could find a canvas for the blood I’m spilling
I’d finger-paint a stain into a black rainbow
Lying in the decayed clover
Could it be this life is over
If I unearth myself maybe I could see the sky
I never was able to feel the sun
So I suppose it’s better that my time is done
I have my answers and no longer need to ask why
Where would I sleep if it was eternal
Closing my eyes now let me go
It’s in these memories my rage burns infernal
Rising like ash over a black rainbow |
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Post by anirbas on Feb 22, 2007 9:31:40 GMT -6
Darkly, starkly stellar offering, M'siah!!!!!!
Just mentally and emotionally banged this nirling's
thoughts to the metaphorical walls of my cranium!
Few can write of darkness,
or the sadder part of reality,
and express it so beautifully,
at the same time...
This Board of Darkness,
is blessed with gifted poets
whom can do so...
But, we don't call you the Lord of Darkness
for nothing...That's a good thing...That's a compliment...
Take it as such...David and I see you as the King of the Dark Zone...
You rock and rule this world...hahahahahaha...But you do...
Harder pressed to choose a "Queen"...Would have to make it a double crown...
For Lauren and Soulfir to share...
I really felt this piece, man...
Drat it...Wish I could say I didn't...
It perfectly put into words,
my own emotional and mental
state of being, the past several weeks...
Just dratted excellent writing, you!
I noticed each verse of this offering,
could have stood as well, as an epigramtical
poem all it's own...Anir.
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Post by anirbas on Feb 22, 2007 9:46:07 GMT -6
Disclaimer: Note to other beloved poetical writer's of darkness...
The above nominations, LOL, in no way denotes
your individual dark writing as being any lesser than the above...
And if you take it as such, you do so at your own expense
and on your own recognizance...As it certainly wasn't meant
to imply such...And I will not own it as such...I didn't even include myself
in the above list...Okie dokie? And I was nicknamed, Darkness
at another poetical site...LOL...But, honestly, if someone
put a knife to our poetical throats and said, "you will tell me,
whom in your humble opinion, is the King and Queen
of the Darkness Zone, now; or die!"
We all know, we'd tag the above
three mentioned poets...Yessssssss?
Everybody be having a brighter day
and keep on bringing the darker poeming!
It's a tough job, no matter who writes it...
But somebody's got to do it...Might
as well, be us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sabrina.
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Post by soulfir3 on Feb 22, 2007 14:34:46 GMT -6
stunning work, BNM. respect - Soul
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Post by vixen on Feb 23, 2007 1:04:11 GMT -6
God I don't have words. Truely gut-wrenching. god your good. vixen
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Feb 23, 2007 9:57:01 GMT -6
Aww, now stop all before you make this dark soul blush. Thank you for all the great support! ~ BNM
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Post by dog on Feb 26, 2007 11:05:49 GMT -6
howl of a poem, dude! i read here awhile before i entered to write
and i have to say, i agree with what the nirchick said about you
and blood and soul. dog
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