Ripping A Razor Across My Heart

[brandnewmessiah]

Save your diluted dreams
It’s not all what it seems
To be the hated
Make more pain for me
Then you’ll be happy
By just how you demonstrated

The way you wield the blade with such charisma
I bet you’d peel away the ugliness inside
And then you’d find the one thing you’ve been missing
The loss of a soul bleeding from my eyes

What’s done can’t be undone
No going back to the start
In the end love is left for dead
Like ripping a razor across my heart

Give me your vicious tongue
Yeah I want some
Of the abuse you are screaming
From your mouth
The venom comes spewing out
Poisoning every wish you’ve been dreaming

At night when your mind walks a path so haunted
By memories of suicidal scars
The tragedies you have always flaunted
Now manifest as wounds upon my arms

What’s passed can’t be recast
A sad comedy only has one star
Act four is the final encore
Which rips a razor across my heart

yeah you cut me
And you gut me
Of every chance to feel ashamed
Now you want me
To again bleed
Make it look like I’m to blame
For my despair
But it was you there
With knife in hand to do your part
Opens my chest
And tears into what’s left
By ripping a razor across my heart

[vixen]

Wow! very powerful. You are so incredibully gifted. I loved this. Vixen

[anirbas]

Powerful, empowering offering, BNM!
Thanks for sharing it on the Darkness board. Sabrina.

[dog]

"yeah you cut me
And you gut me
Of every chance to feel ashamed
Now you want me
To again bleed
Make it look like I’m to blame
For my despair
But it was you there
With knife in hand to do your part
Opens my chest
And tears into what’s left
By ripping a razor across my heart"

BNM

felt the rip and the sting of the razor reading this.
excellent, down to the dirt floor writing. dog