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Post by anirbas on Mar 17, 2007 14:34:47 GMT -6
*foreward: you are about to enter the lair of the dragon...LOL... the following poems are my across the board favorites of anything David has ever written, beyond when he cuts a word dancing rug in the romancing genre, even. in my estimation, the ensuing poems, are some of his finest works and exhibit his flawless multifacety with the written word. he might beg to differ, but this is my forward written about him, not his...ggglgggl...enjoy, but don an abestos suit before hand, as here in lies the sting of the Scorpion, and not the grey lizard variety...the ones with draconian wings, the dragon variety...LOL...to coin a bit of astrologically inclined humor*
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There must be a space for vitriol a place to stir the boiling oil in the crematorium of my head
Lies must enter the rusty furnace as one day I emerge as smoke to choke further generations
~David McConville. 8/2006 ~*~
With threads of darkness the weaver feeds the loom twisted by knots of vitriol; No place here for vivid hues Only echoes of the torture room, As inside a nettle heart, You can hear the twisting Of the screws.
~David McConville. 8/2006
~*~ One day all must burn burn.. burn .. burn ashes to final release accendent, triumphant!
Oh the lick of flames cleansing the putrid flesh of saints and sinners!
such sweet burning fulfilling the promise of fire_n_brimestone
~David McConville. 8/2006 ~*~ Life is but a barbecue - toss another burger on for me..
Some chunks of meat just exist to screw oblivion negates their misery..
Life is but a barbecue - I'll pass on the fries and lettuce..
but ya'll welcome to come for dessert over at the fiery furnace..
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Post by anirbas on Mar 17, 2007 14:38:39 GMT -6
Oh Alice! you’ve broken the looking glass I swooned at that terrible sound..
I always thought the world was square But now you tell me it is round
Oh what a shocking dilemma Dear Alice I feel I’ve slipped down Rabbit’s hole! And now I’ll be late for Hatters party..
Oh Alice! how could you be so cold?
You know hatter likes to play dormouse and he'll fret if I'm not there Oh dear Alice try to take more care!
sincerely yours.. Mad March Hare..
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Opaque as tiffany glass he rises from the casket to celebrate another mass..
Dressed in flowing robes of wax black candles illuminate the parlour of the dead
What dances in his head?
The Springer like master of ceremonies wheels the electric couch down purple painted halls
“The family that lies together Fries together”
Isn’t that the way It was supposed to be Here in the troubled state of mind?
Nightly executions on T.V. Send their frazzled souls to earth… ~David McConville. 8/2/2006
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The gurgling bile of rancid intestinal juices, gargles down the transcendental sluices..
here have another glass of vitriol, before embarking on your trip to the nether regions of hades; where gargoyles leap off dead cathedral walls, crowning your head with pailfulls of bubbling oil..
Be sure to save a pew for me. ~David McConville. 8/2006
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Hangman! Hangman! Tighten the noose.. Consult carefully your table of weights
A rope too short.. - slow strangulation But one too long.. - decapitation
Hangman! Hangman! No need for a hood.. Let them all watch As my face turns puce
Let my dead eyes Rest silently upon Those who see love As a state of abuse..
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Post by anirbas on Mar 17, 2007 14:41:54 GMT -6
Remember how we waltzed at the mortuary dance Your moves brought to mind such dark history; Wearing a shroud of the deepest deep black, You were willing to take a life taking chance
By then you were dead or that’s what you claimed But I still could detect the faintest of life, As we shuffled between tables of skin, But such sustained effort took all that remained
And so finally I left you dancing alone, Inside a locked closet stuffed full of bones
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Mining the darkness down to the core has allowed the light to grow. Now an end to vitriol..
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Post by anirbas on Mar 17, 2007 14:42:43 GMT -6
~Confessions Of A Jukebox.
Most of the discs were broken.. Most of the time. But when somebody thumped my side I sprang back into life..
Love songs I would play, then into dark punk era dirges I was at the total mercy of some harpies misplaced urges
but the tunes I liked the best were the ones they never played
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Post by anirbas on Mar 17, 2007 15:05:03 GMT -6
Maybe it was your Father.. Could have been your Mother Yes they were both to blame They started you on a journey Without a destination But you eventually arrived here Just the same..
And here we're resting At this station Wondering how we ever came
(and to be honest this weird equation freaks me out!)
But here I am and here I'll stay Until directed otherwise
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Stained by reason devoured by emotion broken by love
warped by confession cleansed by denial is God above?
Cindered by devotion laughed at by clowns when push comes to shove
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Uncommon Prayer.
Lord bless the druggie.. The pusher and the pimp The dosser and the cannibal Of God’s creations Most horrible.
The lurkers In the subways, and ghoulish Shadows of overpasses.
Please bless The occupants of concrete isolation chambers, Forgotten by their Mothers And unforgiven by their Fathers
Lord bless the secret drinker.. Who fractured in his misery Broken by his faithlessness, Rolls across the floor of life, Tongue outstretched with mind and stomach wretched in pain, and sweat, and divine Forgetfulness.
~David McConville. 8/2006 ~*~ Fuck you fuck me fuck everyone Fuck is a sword that pierces flesh Fuck is a word we learn at school Because fuck explains everything
Everything defined by fuck.. Fuck is an excuse for nothing
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Post by anirbas on Mar 17, 2007 15:07:58 GMT -6
Don't come too close I will beat you to a pulp.. dead pigs call me from the slaughterhouse squealing as their throats are cut with blunt knives..
Don't come too close I will grip your lying throat.. and squeeze until vomit floods my blood stained fingers ~David McConville. 8/2006
~*~ Oh I’m hurting for a melody To let these missions fly…
Lord have mercy, lord have mercy
Wish I sang like Crosby I’m hurting for a melody..
And I’m hurting for a voice Wish Schubert was on my team..
Lord have mercy, lord have mercy ~David McConville. 8/2006 Don't tell me to grow up bitch That's the card you find so handy mysogeny you claim but turn the card and switch and face miss misandry..
Miss Misandry has a lovely face but she's in love with mysogeny..
Stand back at watch them explode!
Beam us up Scotty.. ~David McConville. 8/2006
~*~ Poets are born not made to challenge the status-quo why are you pretenders here? sometime let me know..
Because I have given my soul and you have spectated.. behind dark glasses pulled it out and masturbated
I hope the orgasm was good don't want to leave you dry everything in moderation..
~David McConville. 8/2006
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Post by soulfir3 on Mar 17, 2007 21:02:47 GMT -6
David these are simply ..
Stunning.. in awe, in total speach forgotten rendered adoration -
of your gift, ability too translate the most deepest, darkest thoughts
into spell binding manifestations of golden prose ........
respectfully,
soul
many thanks to Sabrina, for drawing these out of the shadow box and sharing with us - your talents
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Post by anirbas on Mar 17, 2007 21:23:08 GMT -6
Soul, big ;D your words just gave me. I chose the thread title, as the original thread title these pieces were under, was Vitriol... I may change it to that, yet... Just called it the The Lord of... to tease him...
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Post by DavidMc on Mar 21, 2007 3:54:41 GMT -6
I don't hate these poems, in fact I think some are okay I wrote them all unedited last year when I was pissed off with a certain someone Like the other stuff Sabrina posted on the 'unknown' thread, I didn't keep copies of most of them, so once again i am grateful to the Empurrus for taking the time and effort to exhume the bodies Thank you Soul for the kind comment. David
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Post by anirbas on Mar 21, 2007 7:29:07 GMT -6
LOL...You're so very welcome, Empurrurrrrr...And I'm not through playing grave digger...ggglgggl...I have found scads of your stuff! Sharon needs to go through the Unknown thread and pull some of the stuff she left in it and share it here...It's good stuff, too! Have to drop that hint, hint, hint on her...LOL...Sabrina
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Post by anirbas on Mar 22, 2007 23:04:17 GMT -6
and for what it's worth... body exposition was not the intention... i've simply always admired these grittier pieces and found them worthy of an honorable mention, of course, in my humble opinion... but, i digress as i discourse... it could be worse... i could be wide awake and in the mood to really yak... instead of being mired in the feeling of tired... so, therefore, shutting up...or at least for now...
Love, Sabrina.
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Post by vixen on Mar 22, 2007 23:14:39 GMT -6
David theses are totally amazing. I loved them all,and thanks to Sabs for digging them up,what a waste it would have been if they were lost forever. totally fantastic. Vixen
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