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Post by nimbusGLOW on Apr 14, 2007 15:57:42 GMT -6
NOTHING'S UNSEEN INNATE 'DARK'
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coalesce as dark clouds
these sensations of anguish
this deep yearn for intimate Love
once fully present ... now dimly abandoned
my arcane wish to be shielded from Nothing
for Nothing offers its barren promise of 'more'
Nothing continuously diminishes within itself
leaving glowing embers behind to die
Nothing attempts to deposit Sorrow's residue
only to empty Love's coffers into an abyss
an abyss of Nothing's unseen innate 'dark'
where seclusion's sterile tears fall perpetually
opaque tears of Nothing's mournful sorrow
plunging through caverns of unknown measure
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OF UNKNOWN MEASURE
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leave me be now ... depart upon your journey
let me alone herein ... where you once found me
no more in Nothing's false dreams of unknown measure
will I of unsuspecting manner choose to believe
dare I to continue in this existential quest
Nothing shall not companion me onward
being purged hence forth of untrue oaths
I offer myself never again as Nothing's victim
onward from this perilous realm I shall thus ascend
determined to quell the sting of Nothing's invisible fangs
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I shall not explain
the reason or my timing
in the posting of this poem
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no wish to.
it's very private.
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simply read it
on its own merit.
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please.
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Post by anirbas on Apr 14, 2007 16:30:38 GMT -6
*SHEESH!!!!!!*
You guys are getting down with yourselves up in here, today!!!!!!
You, Messiah and RRW all three, knocking the walls down in the house, today, Nims!
Now that I'm through effusing, my fellow effuser, this piece...
Eloquent, elegant, wisdom clothed as lightness masquerading as darkness...
I feel your pain...I hear your wise words, Padre...Thanks for sharing, Nims! Sabrina.
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Apr 15, 2007 12:43:50 GMT -6
Sbrina
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you are right on target
about the pieces by Messiah
and Rob rrw as well...darkly diaphanous
yet keenly provocative.
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Post by dawness on Apr 15, 2007 13:52:37 GMT -6
i agree 1oo% that your gems are so full of bittersweet pining, nims! gleaming gems... you are never abandoned. you are whole!!! say yes!  |
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Apr 16, 2007 16:16:16 GMT -6
ah yes
'Dawn~GLOW'
indeed
YES
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completely 'whole'
vibrantly alive
radiantly joyful
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but just now
missing that
which once was
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Post by wistfuldragon on May 17, 2007 21:15:02 GMT -6
As I've read and felt the words upon my screen...I was placed neatly into awe...of the poet so blessed in the use of words...I find I am breathless...wondering at my loss of vocabulary to explain how these words on my screen touched the girl within...
Thank you so much for sharing...adored it completely...
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Post by nimbusGLOW on May 18, 2007 12:20:20 GMT -6
thank you
thank you
thank you
my fellow author
'mish~wist'
or would that be
'wish~mist'
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your compliment of high praise
offers me an uplifting breath of assurance
as I've never delved into this realm in the past
yet now I'm working on two more compositions
(truth be told...they're vicariously working on me)
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