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Post by anirbas on May 12, 2007 22:33:38 GMT -6
and in the aftermath will you and your young friends, stand about the leaping flames... them swilling ego and confidence from longnecked bottles of booze while you ooze angst and bitterness from your very pores in soured spews of expletives of what a useless bitch and worthless whore I was? as they egg you on, typical male redneck fashion, to throw some more of that god damned shit of her's on the fire and you'll feel better...and Tolstoy will fly through the air and land with a poof of dead sound that sends blue and saffron sparks arcing and dancing into the flat blue sky of a hot early summer evening as the fire dances in curls about the innocent pages of knowledge your narrowmindedness burns, like everything and everyone else it burned in it's fiery, merciless path...
disclaimer: the rednecks referred to in this piece are fictionalized characters...you do not know them...you do not wish to know them...[hollow laugh] besides, the word redneck in my estimation, has nothing to do with one's occupation or location on the map, but is a state of mind, instead...and is used as such, in this piece...so, please, any countryboys reading this, don't be a poet hater...it ain't referrin' to you boys, okie dokie? LOL...or not...it's an emotive piece, an angst poem, thaz all, folks...Nir.
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Post by dawness on May 13, 2007 11:17:12 GMT -6
whooh, sabs. this drips of some kind of chained pain... free at last from this emotion, i hope?? shimmering gem!
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out, out from the dark of a forest a mind tortured by reckless nights seething grieving from a delusion, an illusion that you were real. and i am suspiciously the fantasy after all
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Post by wistfuldragon on May 13, 2007 14:07:45 GMT -6
Sabrina...this hit a little close to home for me...and that means it was excellent...images burned into my eyes from years past flame into reality... Wisting...me...
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Post by anirbas on May 13, 2007 20:27:10 GMT -6
ooh-la-la, DG, wickedly luscious ditty you honored this thread with!
Dawn and Wist, thank you, ladies for your comments...Was negatively visualizing what happens to some books that find themselves orphaned, left behind, for whatever reasons...drilycrypticsnickergiggle...Nir.
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Post by vixen on May 18, 2007 10:39:26 GMT -6
Sabs, this also hits to close to my doorstep for comfort. May we all someday feel the sunshine of freedom. Love and prayers. Always... Vixen
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Post by anirbas on May 18, 2007 12:19:55 GMT -6
Yes, yes, yes, may we all feel the sunshine of freedom, sooner rather than later, mi amigo. Thanks, Vixen for love and prayers...Same backatcha, sweets! Sabrina.
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