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Post by pamela on Jun 2, 2007 21:17:46 GMT -6
Things have not gone
right for many days now
and I’d be foolish to even
imagine the next day or
so will lend any improvement.
Misguided notions and
overwrought emotions -
the girl with so much hope
has grown to hope for so much less.
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Post by anirbas on Jun 3, 2007 10:26:25 GMT -6
emotive introspection distilled into a spare, elegant poem...got more? Nir.
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Post by wistfuldragon on Jun 3, 2007 12:53:15 GMT -6
Beautiful...bravo...
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Post by pamela on Jun 4, 2007 18:00:23 GMT -6
Thanks to you both. Call this a moment of clarity a year or so ago. I want to hope for so much more again.
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Post by wistfuldragon on Jun 4, 2007 19:16:57 GMT -6
As do we friend...hope keeps us waking...
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Post by wistfuldragon on Jul 4, 2007 13:45:33 GMT -6
Misguided notions and
overwrought emotions -****Pamela****
Upon rereading I adore this line...just had to repost to say that...
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Jul 6, 2007 6:16:33 GMT -6
This is brilliant pamela! It does have the clarity you speak of as of realizing that there is so much more in this life. ~ BNM
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