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Post by DavidMc on Jun 13, 2007 1:51:29 GMT -6
He came from the Irwell delta, To seek a life of fun, But he forgot to take a shelter, And he went Loco in the Sun.
He invades his neighbours houses, Wearing pickled heart on sleeve. But the things that he espouses, Take good reasons to believe.
He went Loco in the Sun. He was hoping for a softer landing, But before he ever come, Should have had a better understanding,
That he wanted to be his Cat, Have a life devoid of complications, But should have put the bottle back Before starting on recriminations.
Now his friends look kind of puzzled, Which isn’t so surprising, From what they think he’s guzzled Is he “MR MOJO RISING” ?
So now he’s gone to find some shade To nurture Love, and peace and hope And the plans that he has made, May yet bloom on yonder slope.
So what will be will be, And what is done is done, And The only guarantee? No more Loco in the Sun.
Sayalonga Feb 8th 2004
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Post by wistfuldragon on Jun 13, 2007 2:55:23 GMT -6
Nice David...very nice...
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Post by anirbas on Jun 13, 2007 9:26:18 GMT -6
No more Loco in the Sun...Intriguing offering of your's I've not yet read, David...Can't blame anyone for wanting to be a well cared for cat...Excellent offering...I could say more, but I'm a bit speechless right now...That doesn't happen, often...Love, Sabrina.
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Jun 14, 2007 17:46:32 GMT -6
Gettin crazy from the heat! Great piece David! ~ BNM
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