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Post by brandnewmessiah on Jun 14, 2007 17:48:09 GMT -6
 In nightshade she lurks
Waiting to pull me into the beauty of darkness
Inside pale cold eyes
I become paralyzed
Submissive to her command
She has hair of fire
Which ignites my fear and turns it to ash
Whipping wildly
I stand by idly
Prepared for a flogging of flames
Tracing blood red nails across my throat
I tip my head back in acceptance
I’ll be your victim if you ask me to
I’ll relinquish my soul to be loved by you
Just voice thy wish on venomous breath
Eager I’ll inhale the poison
To have her inside of me
Possessing my slow beating heart
In her embrace my dying starts
I pledge my vow now to the grave
This dirt that is molded for me
Fetal I’m cupped in her hands
To hold me one last time
To mortality I am blind
And I see again with salvation’s eyes
Hallowed be thy name
The one I cry out in my dreams
I am ready for the final ride
Knowing I’ll have you by my side
So come to me Miss Death |
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Post by wistfuldragon on Jun 15, 2007 10:30:37 GMT -6
Tracing blood red nails across my throat
I tip my head back in acceptance
I’ll be your victim if you ask me to
I’ll relinquish my soul to be loved by you
Just voice thy wish on venomous breath
Flipping HOT writing...I love the heat that comes out of this one...dark erotic...intoxicating...all of it...but these lines...FLIPPING WOW!....you are incredible Sir...as is your poeming...WOW...
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Post by anirbas on Jun 15, 2007 13:23:41 GMT -6
ggglggg...loved the poem, Messiah...Misher's cracked me up with her comments...however, what she said...all true about the piece...love the smiles the poeming or comments I find here, in this place, gives me...giggling again...Anir.
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Post by Sam on Jun 15, 2007 15:35:47 GMT -6
"It's Gettin Hot In Here" Sam  |
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Post by wistfuldragon on Jun 16, 2007 13:44:36 GMT -6
Anir' Lady...I'm glad I could make you smile...I just got so caught up in this poem...but you know me and my darkside...hehehehe...LOL...
Sam Lady...it is isn't it...hehehehe...getting hot in here...love it...lol...
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Post by wistfuldragon on Jul 4, 2007 13:26:27 GMT -6
In nightshade she lurks
Waiting to pull me into the beauty of darkness
Inside pale cold eyes
I become paralyzed
Submissive to her command****BNM****
Can't get over the loveliness of this one in the Darkness true...
Mewistmish
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