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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 15, 2007 22:41:37 GMT -6
hello
loved-ones
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my publisher
now has this version
of the following piece in hand
to review and critique as they wish
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they also have the understanding that
there might be two more additional portions
placed within the later portion of this new poem
(yet here is what has been transcribed thus far)
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 15, 2007 22:47:01 GMT -6
MYTHIC WISH~WINGS
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aye in my fondest dreams
I am playfully humored by
those mythic wish~wings
the ever-charmed wings
of ye elusive 'Fizz~Fizz'
yon pet Wish~Dragon
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playfully precocious
curiously cloistered
within my fantasia
as she frolics freely
tumbling ... circling ... soaring
in reclusive aerobatic maneuvers
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She-Dragon's enormous wings
merely not obligingly lift yon creature
upward into daring comical flight
She-Dragon's powerful wings
glide her gloriously into a soaring ballet
onward pulsing in syncopated rhythm
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whilst I wish upon her wings
my mystical visions obtain clarity
my vivid imagination takes flight
visions of her private domain
the inner world of ILLUSIONIA
where wish and dream converge
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one with the known elements
as be any and all dragon creatures
she doth carefully stow her own wish key
to open the unknown hidden realm
of any element she teasingly avails herself
compelled by the wonder-magic of her heart
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ILLUSIONIA ... replicating Earth World
yet where everything is of crystalline shimmer
in hues depending on any ruling element
all known elements of earthly domain
yet as well ... other unknown elements
of such enigmatic dragon-sphere as this
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dictated by the element of fire
glimmering golden hues prevail
melting into shades of crimson wash
likewise ruled by its pristine water element
fluid shades of teal ... aqua ... indigo
vary within their own liquid light
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dazzling are its wish-lit starry skies
and those abundant dream-lit clouds
glowing within full-moon-beam ambience
silvery pearl light of night
through which lighthearted flight
carries 'Fizz~Fizz' on many a fanciful voyage
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spectacular even more are
such radiant sunrises and sunsets
in which all color glistens as simultaneous billows
creating rainbow enchantment
prismatic halo upon halo of spectral delight
where within yon pet Wish~Dragon drifts and glides
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the air element itself
cleansed of the purest nature
offers temporal currents of influence
the gentle waft of any breeze
the inherent power of the wind
accords whimsy to her aerial amusement
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henceforth I be off to entertain 'Fizz~Fizz'
and lovingly join her ... to 'slay' yon dragon with
my numerous pranks and copious jokes
for I embrace a silent secret
a secret of the deepest concealing vapor
not even wizards yet possess knowledge of it
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Wish~Dragons ... all dragons
are never equal what-so-ever
to any wee moments of joyful laughter
for laughter thus
swiftly and so intriguingly
extinguishes their flaming breath
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Post by anirbas on Sept 17, 2007 20:58:28 GMT -6
You know, Nims...I'm always a sucker for dragon poems...Loved this one!!!! Nir.
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 22, 2007 13:18:51 GMT -6
thank you
'Brina
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I am now a fan of them as well
now if I can simply complete the poems
about Unicorns that I've recently begun writing
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ho~hum
such is poetry
and its mind-meanderings
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Post by wistfuldragon on Dec 3, 2007 15:48:52 GMT -6
Wow...missed this one while I was away...glorious and epic...lovely work Nims...
M...
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