The Unexpected

[anirbas]

Cheryl, I found this piece very interesting--an exploratory quest into a world, I know little to nothing about, honestly.

Enjoyed the fact, that you used the Muslim phrases and translated them, as well, in the story.

Is this a first draft? I can see where it needs some cleaning up but it didn't detract from my interest in the story...In fact, I sort of got drawn into and lost in the telling of the story.
Good work...Haven't hit the story section in a bit...

Drat, just seems like there aren't enough hours in the day to get everything done and do all the things I wish to do...Like, if I had the time, I'd be able to hit every board in here,
and read every poem or story, everyday...

How's the kiddoes and the man, darlin'? More importantly, how are you? Can you believe it,
Ivy just turned twelve...Excuse me, would you please tell her to stop growing up? I keep telling her that, but she just giggles at me...LOL...Brat...Who told her she could turn twelve?

Take care and always blessed be and blessed keep writing, lady!!!!!! Sabrina.

[bichsa]

peace to you my dear sister friend wow 12 your getting younger everyday ,I have re read it a million times still that old learning disability kicks in yes its a first draft it is based on my son attending public highschool .i wanted to create short stories that relate to the growing american muslim kids and what their challenges are ,and this is an issue many have to face.thanks for the feed back ,always in need of it. as for the whole gang they are doing well my oldest now a junior ,also her first year in public school ,the part about humanities class is true about the topic and she blew the class away ,says her teacher,i was very proud.many of this story is their lives entwind together to create the short story,I hope it was intreging ,i am new to this and enjoy it,any feed back welcome especially with my dyxlexia.peace to you dear sister ,cheryl

[DavidMc]

Hey Cheryl! Great story.

Dislexia I can't even spell the word What's important here is what's in you heart... You have a great heart and it's a privalige you shar it with us.

David