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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 12, 2006 13:22:28 GMT -6
Please see re-formatted verion.
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Post by shell on Sept 13, 2006 3:52:44 GMT -6
i may have to meltdown completely in bliss, Nim, if you are going to keep posting such beautiful writing! Verse 3 especially is pure liquidsoulflow ... actually i may be wordless for a moment ... and i may just float in these two poems of yours for the rest of the day ... thank you ... yep, i love this!
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Post by dawness on Sept 13, 2006 10:59:46 GMT -6
nimsical as always! so bouyant, i can swim with the rhythm of your being. hugggs, pal.
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 16, 2006 23:21:26 GMT -6
...TO OCEAN...
I go to Ocean on quiet days when I wish to be relaxed by her whisper
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I go to Ocean on stormy days when I need to be awed by her thunder
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I go to Ocean on any day for I feel I shall be rapt in her grandeur
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I go to Ocean on moon-lit night where I know I will be charmed in her glitter
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I go to Ocean and Ocean always welcomes me
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 5, 2006 22:32:17 GMT -6
OCEAN...REALM...LOVE
Sea Sky She ... contemplation continuation completion ... communion inspiration infusion ... OCEAN REALM LOVE ... .. .
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Post by soulfir3 on Oct 12, 2006 3:14:51 GMT -6
yep, I'm with Shell on this one... totally speechless, floating in the beautiful serenity of your words it is.
I'm so relaxed, I may even sleep tonight.
respect, Soul
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