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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 4, 2006 1:33:37 GMT -6
Well, this is a complete re-creation of a piece that was part of another thread within this forum. My publisher lovingly offered some input as how to compose it with a more (get this) "fluid flow" (oh they're the clever ones...cute pun)...and without any hesitation, I deleted the previous version so this one would have its own 'life'...so to speak.
DOLPHIN 'FAMILY'
here in this secluded lagoon my devoted dolphin 'family' freely share themselves with me
to drift and glide and soar as aqua-aerialists in magic-fluidity we maneuver with unrestrained agility
when time summons for us to temporarily part Wish deeply bids me to go where they go
as my blessings join them may my genuine reverence soon faithfully return them here once again ...
for further exploration into their healing playfulness through the rejuvenation of togetherness
I await in the glow of their radiant memory
I hover within the thrill of our brilliant imagination ...
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Post by dawness on Oct 4, 2006 11:55:36 GMT -6
flow. glow and go, nims....
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 5, 2006 22:33:40 GMT -6
PLANET'S JESTERS
are dolphins in true essence the Planet's cherubs joyously frolicking while healing all humanity anointed in the Sea's play-land
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Post by magpie on Dec 13, 2006 19:41:32 GMT -6
Beautiful work! i loved being in the water with the dolphins too - these are lovely poems.
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