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bichsa
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If you want change,you must change from within first!

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Gently Jan 3, 2007 15:06:02 GMT -6

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Post by bichsa on Jan 3, 2007 15:06:02 GMT -6

[glow=red,2,300][/glow]
As the leaf
falls gently
gently
to the cold
frozen ground

It slowly
blows across

Dancing quietly
glistening in
the late afternoon glow

Shadows
dancing along
as it goes

Blowing softly
towards
its final abode

A journey towards
its last destination

Its green and red
are now dead

Gone from its day of glory
its brown and wrinkled tone
holding its short life's story

Its job finished
Its come full circled

Gently blowing
till evening comes

It gently crawls
under a bush
softly it disappears
into the night air

It's job is done!

anirbas Admin In memory of when I cared. Posts: 10,241	Gently Jan 3, 2007 22:11:32 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by anirbas on Jan 3, 2007 22:11:32 GMT -6 Visual and tactile poetic offering, Cheryl... I saw the picture and felt it's visuals, too...cold, softly, wrinkled... A treat seeing your work on the nature board...An absolute treat...So, got more? Sabrina.

DavidMc Administrator Posts: 2,508	Gently Jan 4, 2007 6:13:50 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by DavidMc on Jan 4, 2007 6:13:50 GMT -6 Beautiful visual write you have painted here Cheryl. David
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bichsa Member If you want change,you must change from within first! Posts: 505	Gently Jan 4, 2007 7:37:02 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bichsa on Jan 4, 2007 7:37:02 GMT -6 thanks to two of my favorite poets. peace to you both C!

glenn Member Posts: 619	Gently Jan 4, 2007 14:56:17 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by glenn on Jan 4, 2007 14:56:17 GMT -6 Nicely done, Cheryl.

soulfir3 Guest	Gently Jan 4, 2007 15:04:43 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by soulfir3 on Jan 4, 2007 15:04:43 GMT -6 beautiful work.

blownawayby: Sabs&Co!!!! It is I, Daph, aka blownaway, still alive, kicking a little lower for all the wear, but alive and so happy I came across Poetry Seasons' email address today. Hope to drift in and out a little more often than every death of a pope!

Aug 12, 2023 17:23:13 GMT -6

artolmaeus: it is Sunday, the first day of the week and I have been awake too long, good night, thank you for this thing you do that has been ongoing, for as long as it does, well, I am glad it is here... Sept 17, 2023 0:23:26 GMT -6

anirbas: OMG! Blownawayby!!! Daph, I am so glad you found us, again! I always wonder where everyone goes, or how they are, when they disappear. I have been MIA for a while, now, myself. Good to see you! Oct 16, 2023 22:37:35 GMT -6 *

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