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Ripple
Jan 4, 2007 15:11:56 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Jan 4, 2007 15:11:56 GMT -6
With a sudden surge of flourishing hope the water cascades downward through valley and creek seeping in between the hollow cracks which gaze upward, like eyes which only see the whiteness of the horizon
Weeping onto the land as each ripple, brings rich, green abundance of life animals grazing as kangaroos bounce half lazily and the cattle, emit their pitching bellows echoing from within the circle of surrounding mountains
No longer can the smoke be seen red glowing embers of the night, extinguished as rain pelts forth cold invigorating sending ripples from the furtherest streams to this now marshy earth
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Ripple
Jan 5, 2007 10:17:45 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Jan 5, 2007 10:17:45 GMT -6
This is a lovely descriptive piece ... What is your relationship with Kangaroos? LOL!
;D
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Jan 5, 2007 11:00:32 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Jan 5, 2007 11:00:32 GMT -6
Ripple is soothingly beautiful, Soul...So, descriptive, for a few seconds... I was there in Ozland, in the middle of it all...Sabrina.
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Jan 5, 2007 14:37:59 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Jan 5, 2007 14:37:59 GMT -6
This is a lovely descriptive piece ... What is your relationship with Kangaroos? LOL! ;D Being that I am a good 45 mins from the closest township, the Roos are my nearest thing to "civilised" company. Delighted that you and Sabrina both enjoyed this piece.
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Jan 6, 2007 8:15:44 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Jan 6, 2007 8:15:44 GMT -6
Soul, could you tell us something about the roos, from your perspective?
David
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Ripple
Jan 8, 2007 0:42:39 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Jan 8, 2007 0:42:39 GMT -6
Dawn rises slowly, from the cool shade of trees until sunlight casts his ready gaze flickering softly against an aged landscape and there he is Mr.Roo tall, proud majestic In colours of deepest reds and browns eyes softly warming a tail, long strong and round Long hind legs, with which an easy bounce transports him from here too another distant place As a small tribe this family arrived from the hills and it's from the back of the verandah, I watch them play in a line from dam bank too the horizon shore At dusk ever watchful eyes wander my way shake of the head flick of the ear and away with a jump
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Jan 9, 2007 13:00:18 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Jan 9, 2007 13:00:18 GMT -6
WOW! What amazing creatures - I mean, how long does a tail have to be -. I hate it when I hear they are just hunted down for sport or road kill. David.
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Jan 10, 2007 7:49:27 GMT -6
Post by bichsa on Jan 10, 2007 7:49:27 GMT -6
wow! cool nice work i love roo's, how cool to have them in your back yard ,I only get foxes.my sons would love it there.keep up your great writing,peaceC.
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Jan 10, 2007 22:39:09 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Jan 10, 2007 22:39:09 GMT -6
Call Me Dingo eyes penetrate, with eerie gaze from beyond in the distance watching unwary prey golden sleek coat, dyed muddy brown paws large, padded firmly footed on ground ears pricked forwards nose sniffs the air sneaking ever closer sinking low into the undergrowth unseen by the unwilling as family rounds the back not just the one, but an entire pack painfully slow, blitzingly fast their choice of dinner tonight captured with one last failed bleat echoing into the scrub land holding each footprint as another, of it's eerily intriguing past
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Jan 10, 2007 22:46:38 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Jan 10, 2007 22:46:38 GMT -6
Soul, are these original Photos? They're terrific!
David
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Jan 10, 2007 22:50:41 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Jan 10, 2007 22:50:41 GMT -6
Thanks David, and yes they are. Mostly taken from my place or at my ex inlaws.
Soul
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Jan 10, 2007 23:07:24 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Jan 10, 2007 23:07:24 GMT -6
The shadow across Dingos eye is so striking.
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Jan 12, 2007 20:57:49 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Jan 12, 2007 20:57:49 GMT -6
Beautiful poetry and equally beautiful photography, to boot! Great stuff, Soul. Adored the 'roo and dingo poems, because I just did! Nir.
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Jan 14, 2007 22:39:45 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Jan 14, 2007 22:39:45 GMT -6
Thanks very much David and Sabrina
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Jan 14, 2007 22:46:00 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Jan 14, 2007 22:46:00 GMT -6
clouds scurry across a bleak skyline so hot is the breeze which blows that heat ripples in an almost insufferable blanket against all that stands between me and it sweat pearls upon the skin briefly the heat is cooled and then, it is stamped out and breathing becomes more paced as clouds again begin their race eyes are seeking for the smallest hope that there is moisture there, for which we can see rain too fall in fast thick succession and maybe, with any luck finally break this onslaught of drought and an ever looming sickening bout of depression
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Jan 14, 2007 23:53:12 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Jan 14, 2007 23:53:12 GMT -6
ah, for a moment, reading this poem, was like warming my hands against a fire... it's so cooooooooooldddddddddddddd, here in Nirland...but, drought season bites... nothing bites about this poem, though...unexpected twist with the last two lines...nice... hibernation urges are overtaking me, Soul...so, off to bed I go, sweets! nightie night, sweet dreams, doncha let the bedbugs bite...no...no... it's good morning, sweet daydreaming doncha let the roos kick you! for you...beautiful pictures of the dingo and the kangaroos...i'm drawn to pause and stare at them a few seconds, each time I hit this thread... gotta go...eyes are closing...forehead is about to connect to the keyboard...Nir.
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Jan 15, 2007 2:06:08 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Jan 15, 2007 2:06:08 GMT -6
Depression coils tightly over this land even with skies looming dark preciously ominous still there is no rain as darkness falls cries can be heard hurtful bleating as earth animals and man hold still praying, hoping that skies will spill open drenching the thirst of all below as mountains disappear under cloudy sky breathing is halted hopeful dream-filled sighs Depression spoils the richest faith devouring all that is given spilling like rotten debris onto the ground that these farmers, have driven themselves into oblivion trying to win a futile argument - with wayward seasonal movement winds scurry the fertile dirt leaving instead barren, dry bones of the lost laying bleached and unearthed
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