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Post by bichsa on Feb 14, 2007 8:09:41 GMT -6
This is an old piece I came across today i wanted to post it here at Seasons.Peace Cheryl
Wild horses
running free
surrounded by an endless
shadowing of trees
opening through to the grassy plains
free to roam
free to graze
galloping along
at full speed
a thunderous storm was creeping along
growing ominous clouds
of black and green
rolling in with clapping sound
flashing light
coming near
frightening their happiness
filling them with fear
colors of breath taken beauty
browns,and whites
some of tan
Unapproachable beauty
all roaming,running
galloping in fear
I rode peacefully
just me and my chum
enjoying the air,beauty and sun
The storm had past
we rode toward the shadows
the towering trees
enjoying each hoof across
the leaves.
hauntingly peaceful an ery silence
not knowing what was in store
such horrors as we
slowly advanced the next corridor
flesh and fur of Allah's creation
crushed!
larger then life
they lay one then two
their bodies crushed
below
Brown ones ,white ones, tan ones too!
Beautiful horses were everywhere
fallen trees and faces of horror
One died standing
defending his honor
such sadness that we had encountered
Our eyes a witness
to natures madness
Dear chum
you mustn't get undone
Allah created them
to run in the sun
and with His command
All can be undone!
The storm had come
The storm had gone
Our hearts were saddened
they lay heavy on the floor
My dream was over
My dream was so real
I wonder what it is
they are trying to reveal?
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Post by anirbas on Feb 14, 2007 14:06:42 GMT -6
Ooh...Ooh...Ooh...That's all I can say/type...Ooh...
So much I wish to say about this poem...
But, the twist of a surprise ending left me chilled, discombobulated...I can't think...
Hot drat, Cher Ami! The most I can say at the moment...Is first I was running with the horses...I was the horses, the storm, the land...You looking out at me...The next...
I was still the horses...But, I wasn't where I was expecting to go in the poem...
HELL OF A THRILLER ENDING...not seen you do something such as this
that doubles back with a twist...This one ought to go in Dawn's Surprise ending thread to!
She'll love it! I've seen a couple this morning that could post there...
This one and one I read of Sammy's earlier...
Great day for reading and readers is all I've got to say!
And the ladies have all taken the floor
and are cutting the rug up,
as the colliquism goes!
Evernir, evenhere...LOL...
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Post by bichsa on Mar 5, 2007 8:34:11 GMT -6
Thanks my dear Miss Sabrina ,Not sure what the meaning of the dream was but it was a thrill of a dream ,I asume because my dear chum ,was diagonized right after this dream with possible cancer,to me it meant for her to be strong and take what God has given and be patience .especially theses lines of my dream:Allah created them
to run in the sun
and with His command
All can be undone!
oh well ,my mind thinks too much ,much peace ,C!
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Post by soulfir3 on Mar 7, 2007 15:42:59 GMT -6
breath-taking in it's powerful story, certainly had this reader wrapped tightly inside it's threads
wonderful piece, Cheryl - thoroughly enjoyed it
respect, Soul
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