the day

[anirbas]

sun
peeks over
the eastern rim
of the horizon...
a child awakening...
peeping out from under
the vast, blue blanket of the sky...

~*~

dusk expands into the night
night zeniths, arches voluptuously,
contracts and becomes the day

[nimbusGLOW]

Oh My God
...

ever'NIR'
you have once again
accomplished a masterpiece
of brevity...clarity...purity
...

and those final two lines
...
*Bravisimo*

[anirbas]

Thanks, Nims. Thanks a million.

[nimbusGLOW]

Sabrina
you're welcome
a million~million
...

and this is a re-post
from another thread
that I was hoping would
fit in nicely with your poem
yours is so elegant in its simplicity



DAWN'S CANDLE


.
..
...

Morning
is continuously
unfolding somewhere
on the sphere of our planet

... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...

someplace at all times
there is the glow
of Dawn's
Candle

...
..
.

[anirbas]

Glowing offering, Nims! Thanks for honoring this thread and sharing it, here! Didn't mean to seem to ignore it...Just haven't wandered down the nature hall of the 'seasons, in a bit...LOL

~*~

computer time
is about to be cut short
this day that has risen
on the bellies of clouds
scuddling low on the horizon...

the wind rises...brings surmises...
a thunderstorm is about to sweep
hard and fast down upon
this neck of the woods...

a glance at the television screen
reinforces that thought...
the weatherlady is proclaiming
"batten down the hatches!
a thunderstorm is almost
upon the metroplex..."

okay, that's the gist...
not what she said...
weather people
don't speak
poet-eeze...
but, they do speak
weather-eeze!
so, quick! like I ought to...
soon I shall phht! pop!
disappear
from here...

before lightning
fries the entity
and I'm history,
for good!

ya'll take care! enjoy the day,
or night, wherever you are!
and always, poem on! Nir.

that's about right...
just about the time
i finally get all ryhmyie
and chimie...
i can't play with words
the weather's bad...
and is raining on my parade...LOL...