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Spring
Mar 24, 2007 7:06:25 GMT -6
Post by poeticbytes on Mar 24, 2007 7:06:25 GMT -6
SpringI did not write this poem today. My words have all gone out to play. The sun is shining bright and warm. beckoning spring brings forth her charm. I hear the birds,see grass grass green. The air is warming fresh and clean. I see new smiles as she takes hold While her friend the sun sprinkles all with gold. As with the birds there's cause to sing Coming renewed after the cold. So out I go to embrace this nature, play in her grandeur Revel at her stature. For only she's able to bear all these things So I've left the writing to my good friend Spring. ...PB (I would like to thank Spring for being with me...just in time )
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Spring
Mar 24, 2007 14:28:10 GMT -6
Post by dawness on Mar 24, 2007 14:28:10 GMT -6
such a nice way to usher spring... and loved the drifting tone too, jb!
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Spring
Mar 26, 2007 3:38:49 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Mar 26, 2007 3:38:49 GMT -6
A charming write ticbyte, inspires one to loll in the sun David
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Spring
Mar 26, 2007 12:49:01 GMT -6
Post by vixen on Mar 26, 2007 12:49:01 GMT -6
Wow I love this, I saw a robin today. Spring is surly on the way. Yeah!!! Thanks for the great read. vixen
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Spring
Mar 26, 2007 15:51:39 GMT -6
Post by rrw on Mar 26, 2007 15:51:39 GMT -6
Soft and sweet. I like the changing of rhyme schemes in it. A nice spring lullaby.
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Spring
Apr 3, 2007 7:06:31 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Apr 3, 2007 7:06:31 GMT -6
Poeming as fresh as spring! Thanks for sharing this with us, PB. Nir.
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